增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起),不计分。
As far as I’m concern, houses in the future will be like to be built with environment-friendly materials. The materials are wonderful, that can not only produce electricity by take in air and sunshine, but also keep the houses warm in winter and cool in summer. In addition, if there is a accident happening in the house, the host will receive an alarm call immediate. Most importantly, once some disasters such earthquakes or storms happen, the house will fly away to avoid the danger.
In a word, with the develop of science and technology, I believe my dream will be come true. And the houses in the future will became more comfortable to live in.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I had been longing for my dream house. It will be an one-story wooden house with a huge courtyard, where I can grow whatever I like. It will be a living room, a dining room and three bedrooms. I will decorate my house a green way because it can make me to feel relaxed. With science and technology developing fast, many change will take place and the house will be smarter or smarter. For example, I will control a TV and a light just by talking to all of them. All of the housework will be done by robots, leave me more time to have fun and do something more meaningfully.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last night, I watched a TV program, what was about transforming a small old apartment into the modern place. I couldn’t believe my eyes when I see the final image the house. My father, an architect, tells me that changing the structure and even if how the walls look is fairly hardly. I really like the idea that it is irresponsible to knocking down a building to build a new one when you can just improve them. It was also amazed that the program represented a very simple lifestyle. It is no doubt that such a program will inspire people to live well in small places.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jo worked at a bush school whose classrooms was made of bamboo and the roofs of grass. It took the students about two hours get to the school. The other day, Jo visited Tombe's home in a remoting village. When they arrived at the village, Tombe's mother was working in her garden. Tombe's father led them to their house, a low bamboo hut with grass stick out of the roof, which she could only see one broom, a few tin plates and cup and a couple of jars. That they ate were sweet potatoes, corn and greens. That night Jo and Jenny slept in a newly made platform. They left the village next morning after many goodbyes or handshakes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:l.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a little boy, I see a science fiction film. It was about the future world, in that the way people lived was so astonished. What made me especially surprised was that I could drive cars in the sky! Since now, I have been curious the future world. Just about 100 years ago, flying in the sky seemed totally impossible, but now we can travel around a world by plane. With the latest achieve in technology, we can deal with most of our problem. Now we can even pay our bills online. I believe that the future world will become a much more nicer place than what it is.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a dream that one day I could be the pianist. I dream of play a sweet piece of music for those who need music, bringing happiness for other. I love music and I love the feel of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the musical sounds, the beautiful but powerful sound a piano makes impresses me much. It’s clear I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practice for two hours every day if time permitted and learn as many songs as I can. I will put down my heart into my dream and never give up. I am confidence that one day my dream will come true.
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
I often imagine what I will be in the future. I desire to work as a computer program designer, for I am crazy about designing computer programs and had won first prize in software designing contests three time. Besides, I find it excited to work out a program for which is beneficial to our life. What makes us satisfied with this job is because it will provide me with flexible time. As result, I can spare time to keeping my family company. No matter how hardly it is, I will ever give up halfway.