增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
This Friday is the traditional Dragon Boat Festival, also knowing as Duanwu Festival. One of the major custom is to make and eat rice dumplings. It’s obviously that most people don’t make rice dumplings at the present. They can buy it at the supermarket or online. However, it’s still considering one of the most important elements celebrate the festival. It’s not easy to make rice dumplings by hand, that takes too much time. And it is fun and brings family members together. So let’s made our own rice dumplings to keep the tradition alive.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This year I enter the Great Gorilla Run in London. This is a programme run by The Gorilla Organization to raise money save the world’s last remaining gorillas from die out. Each runner received the gorilla suit and off we went! It was a bit hot and sweat inside the suit, and my legs ached, and it was interesting. The funniest moment was that someone watching the race offered I a banana — a real treat for a running gorilla! I had a great day out of in London, as well as helping to save gorilla!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To inspire us students to take exercise outdoor and build all of us up, so our school organized a sports meeting. Hundreds of students took active part. The meeting included various events designing for all students. Among them the 4×100m relay made the strongest impression for us. With great cheers, the athlete set out for the finishing line in high spirits. All the players presented our best performance during these events. Everyone felt happy with that they had gained from the activity. It not only teaches us the meaning of unity and let us true enjoy a colorful school life, but also promoted our friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle is a firefighter. The work of firefighters is to put out fire and responds to emergencies involving life or property. In face of danger, we are always the first to step out. That is because I admire them very much. Last Sunday, his way back home, my uncle hear someone shouting for help. Turn around, he saw many people running to the river. He rushed over. It was turned out that a boy dropped into the river when playing with water. My uncle jumped in and saved a boy with the help of several other passers-by. The people all praised him for his selflessly behavior.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a very hot weather and my bike stopped running in the middle of the road. Therefore, I didn’t have tools on my bike to repair it. At that moment, an old man were passing by and asked me how happened. I told him that my bike is not starting. He replied, “I live nearby. I will fetch some tools, then we will try to fix it.” Five minutes late, he came back, gave me some tools and helped me repair them. At last, we fixed it successfully and felt very relaxing and calm. He also brought me a drink. He was so generous, and I thanked him for being so kindly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was relaxing at the apartment’s pool yesterday evening while I saw something smaller swimming across the water. I got up and walked the edge of the pool and noticed it was the squirrel. I was not sure that how it got in the pool, but with no easy way out it surely will have drowned. With no basket nearby to fish it out, I simply reached after it, grabbed it gentle around the waist, and set it on the pool deck. The little thing were all wet, but rushed off from the pool. Be a lifeguard volunteer, now I can add “squirrel” to my lists of beings I’ve pulled out of the water.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, aiming to enriched our school life, we students took part in an activity with the theme of “Getting to Know the Intangible Cultural Heritage Around Us”, organizing by the Student Union. The lecture was delivered a famous craftsman. He showed us what to make clay figures and displayed much of his art works, which were highly awarded. After the lecture, we made one under the guide of the master, from him whom we learnt much about cultural heritage. Not only did this activity gave us an opportunity to see beauty works of art, but it also increased our knowledge.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I decided to visit Hong Kong for our holidays in last summer. I was very happy because I looked forward to go there for a long time. Hong Kong, which is coastal city in China, impressed me with its high building. The sky was blue and the air was fresh, which were that relaxed me. I enjoy taking a walk along the beach while my mother liked reading her book, laying on her chair. I also liked surfing in the sea with my father, who tried hardly to keep her balance. How excited the experience was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Halloween is usually celebrated among family, friends and, sometimes, co-workers. Adults may celebrate by watching horror films or hold costume parties. Many children dress up fancy costumes and visit other homes, where they demand sweets, snacks or the small gift. If they get nothing, they threaten to do some harms to the inhabitants of the house. This is known as playing “trick-or-treat” and is supposed to happen in a friendlier spirit. Besides, for parents, if their children will take part, it is important to accompany them and to check their “treats” to make sure they are safe to eat or play with.
Some families carve lanterns with “scary” faces out of pumpkins to decorate their homes and gardens, what are intended to drive off evil spirits. If we are at home on Halloween, it is a good idea to have a bowl of small presents or sweets to offer to anyone who knock on your door. This will help you to please the little spirits in your neighborhood!
增加:在缺词处加一个洞字符号(⋀), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处.多者(从第 11处起)不计分，
In order to bring down the number of accident and make drivers aware of the danger of driving much fast, many speed cameras are fixed on the roads. Most of them were placed in bright yellow boxes, so drivers can see it clearly from a distance and slow down. On other hand, some officials have the opposite ideas.They believe hiding cameras are more effective than visible ones. The reason is because drivers, not knowing the exact locations of the cameras, will drive more cautious. The police are now gathered related data to make sure which is good.
