增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In your e-mail,you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken,a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First,it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally，that is important for the family. What's more,children or parents can benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition,every member should give other member right expectations. Finally,you should love my own family life. In a word,if you want to own a healthy family,it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Marie Perdu is famous as her wonderful cooking. She works in great restaurants. You can often see her online, but she is only fourteen year old! Marie, that has two brothers and a cat, looks like any other teenager. She goes to school every day and always do her homework. She often goes shopping with her friends and goes to the cinema once the month. She never plays computer games but watches TV because of she usually cooks in her free time. Sometimes she cooks a big meal for his family and friends at the weekend. Marie doesn’t feel nervous when she works in busy kitchens because she enjoys cook so much. What is Marie’s dream? She wants have her own restaurant!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I love my father. He is a tall and handsome man. He is strict for me. It is his devotion to his work that makes me respect her. My father is a reporter and he uses an old computer write. He doesn’t take a printer with him when he travels. He says it isn’t necessarily. He just looks at the text on the screen, correcting it and then sends it to the newspaper that he writes for it. He also uses the Internet when he wants to search for informations. His computer isn’t very good or often crashes. Therefore, he always said if he has enough money, he will buy a better computer. I’m determine to save enough money and buy one for him one day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I have one thing in common: We are all music lovers. My father loves singing as well as listening music. Every morning, he will go to the park nearby and practise sing there. In the evening, when he usually enjoys music with my mother. He says music makes himself relaxed after a day's work.
Unlike my father, I like playing a violin. I'm regarded as one of the best violinist in my school. I still remember I once invite my father to the music festival in my school which I played a beautiful piece of music. I could see how proudly he was while I was playing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I'll meet him at the airport and then we will take Bus No. 8 for my home. You worry about the weather here in your last email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from that in your city. It isn't very cold, but you needn't bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
Looking forward to meet you soon.
Yours,
John
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Alice,
Learning you lost in the Chinese Manners Competition last week, I feel terribly sorry because I once had same experience.
I true understand your feeling. But you have got fully prepared on advance, so there is nothing to regret. Actually, you have benefited greatly from this experience, through that you are aware that Chinese manners is so broad and meaningful. Life is full of the unexpected, but whatever hard it is, future still holds their meanings. I am always ready to give you more detailing information about the Chinese manners.
Don’t lose your heart and keep on trying, and your efforts will surely pay out next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Housework is annoying and always takes my mother a great deal time. Well, I’m glad to lend her the hand. After meals, I often offer to wash the dish first. It makes my hands oily, but I don’t care at all. Beside, I often help her clean the kitchen. Not only do she clean the wall but also sweep the floor in the kitchen. After cleaning, I’m often pleasing to ask my mother to check it up to see that it meets her demand. She always wears out a smile on the face, which makes me really happy. In my opinion, doing housework gave me mental relief from study and pushes me to be a responsibility person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
It is hardly to live with my little sister Cindy. She always follows me. When I sit at my computer, she will touch my keyboard and screen and as if I am playing chess with my friend, she will make so much noise. She loves model planes, toy gun and robots, so it's easy for her to turn her attention to something else. One moment she is laughing and clapping her little hands, the next she is kicking her plane and then reaching for edge of the table. That’s why she finds some pens on the table. Last Sunday, I had a cold, so I stay in my bedroom and asked her to stay in our living room, and then I told very easy riddles for her to answer. At first, she showed great interest to it, but later she came to my room, and tried her best to pull me out of my room. At latest, I had to take her out. Cindy is always followed me, but I love her.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was November 21, my parents wedding anniversary. But we have just buried my father the week before. Felt down, I ran into the bank to cash a check. The teller counted my changes. “Wow,” he said. “This penny is from 1951.” That was the year what my parents married. I saw it was a wheat penny. My sweet dad was coin collector. She had jars full of wheat pennies. If the teller had not been mentioned it, I would have spent that penny with a second thought. But now I will permanent value my penny from heaven.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There was once a little boy which lived with his mother in our flat. His father was abroad and his mother was very busy, so my mother decided to take care the boy. She always made lunch for the boy and myself. Sometimes she was invited the boy and his mother to come to our house. We had a most pleasantly time together. But one day, the boy's father called, say he would take the boy to live with him abroad. His mother agreed but the boy left. Years late we saw a man at our gate looking in. It was him! He comes back to show his thankful to my mother for what she had done. My mother's example shows that kindness always brings kindness.
