增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of network and informations technology, online learning has been wide used in our learning. Since then, it has been brought many benefits despite some shortcomings.
The online learning, that is convenient and efficient, allows we to attend classes any time we want. Therefore, it cannot be ignored that students is likely to be bothered by devices like social media apps or online games. Getting rid of all the possible distractors improved online learning efficiency. Prepare all the needed devices before the class is also necessary. Technology is changing everybody’s life. We should make full use it to make our work and life better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the fast development of science and technology, our studies are sure to change great. As for us, lifelong learning is the must in the future.
First, we can study in anywhere in the future, not just at school. For example, we can have various online class from the best teachers without leaving our home, make our learning more convenient. Besides, there will have more tools like Ding-ding and Wechat help us study. We will have no exams at school as all of us students can study easily and do that we have a gift for. Learning will also be delighted for all of us.
Every time I look forward to the future, I can’t feel more excited because many kinds of possibilities were waiting for me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Of all the invention, I think the Internet is the most useful. First, the Internet makes it easier for us to keep touch with our friends. We can talk with them online or even can see them. Second, we can finish our work fast and better than before. It helps us save lots of the time. Third, we can get almost all kinds of information that we needed from the Internet. It’s a good way to know about the outside world. Last, we can do the shopping online without leave home. We can save many time and money to buy things in this way. The Internet makes your life more colorful and interested. It’s really a useful invention.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The study has revealed that renting clothes is worse for the planet than throwing it away. It found that renting clothes have the highest climate impact of all. The hiding environmental cost was delivery and packaging costs. Renting involves a large amount of transportation, taken the clothes back and forth between the warehouse and the renter. Dry cleaning is also extremely harm to the environment. The study found many rental brand misuse the term “circular economy”—the system which clothes are passed from person to person before being recycled—as a form of green washing. And if rental companies transform their logistics for a climate-friendly mode, renting would equal reselling. It was also found that the most sustainable way to consume fashion is buy fewer items and to wear them for as long as possible. “You want to be sustainable? Buy less, buy better,” Thomas said.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, a heated debate about whether social media are good or bad was hold in our class. Here is different opinions on this topic.
What some students supported was social media could create more chances for people to communicate and share our experiences. Therefore, it became much easier to make friends. Beside, they could obtain the later news at home and abroad at any moment. However, some students who agreed with them thought that people’s personal information couldn’t be guaranteed and it was use the social media frequently that occupied too much time.
As far as I’m concerned about, only if we use social media properly will it be benefit to us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tens of million of people carry their smartphones with them everywhere they go, included the bathroom. Our phones are always within their grasp, which means they are also constantly being exposed to however bacteria we may have accumulated on our hands. Unfortunately, a new survey of 1,200 Americans and their cleaning habits find that 25 percent of them have never cleaned their phones. Researchers estimate that a regularly use smartphone that has never been cleaned may hold up more bacteria than an entire household bathroom. According to survey conducted by the company VitalVio, that is common for smartphone users to come into contact with various forms of bacteria. Suddenly, eating a sandwich in your bathroom doesn't sound so badly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday I took the subway home as usually. Since our physics teacher had just teach us in class that the escalator(自动扶梯)worked, I decided to see how fast the escalator went. To my surprise, it went a speed of about 40 m/min. The next day, I went to a department store with her cousin Emily. I timed the escalator here too. I found that it was much slower, going about 30 meter every minute. Why? I check on the Internet and found the reason. Stores slow down escalators on a purpose, allowing customers more time to looking at their products.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出添加的单词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词；
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information online, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk to others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information online that is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Wechat is becoming increasing popular with people. Recently I have been made a survey among my classmates about the use of Wechat. According to the result, 65% of the classmates often use it because comparing with other means of communication, Wechat had more advantages. It is cheap, convenient and easily to send all kinds of message around. However, 15% of them are against using it, say it will affect their study. Not using Wechat, the rest have no opinion about them. As far as I'm concerned, since Wechat brings us great convenient, it should be made good use. We shouldn't let it control our minds and behaviors.
