增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the Internet becomes the more and more popular, some students can’t help play online games or chatting. It was not only a problem of wasting time, but also a seriously problem which does harm to their health. Which teachers should do first is to find out what makes them addicting to computer games. Lack of love from his parents? Poor test scores? Parents can have a heart-to-heart talk with them. Secondly, teacher should help them build up their confidence but make them interested in studies. Thirdly, find something else for them to do instead playing computer games.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Miller,
How is it going? You asked me for some advices on how to be a successful student in your last letter. Here are my personally suggestions. If you want to be a successful student, I shouldn't aim to go from a “C” to an “A”. Instead, you should work on going to a “C+” or then a “B-” and so on. In this way, your goals (目标) is easy to achieve and you will be interesting in your study. Successful students know that what it's hard to improve their study very fast. They pay attention to the details instead jumping ahead to the final product. If you spend time in improve your study little by little, I believed you can be a successful student.
Yours,
John
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
刚除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Xiao Dong.
I'm sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easily to change if you take my advices. Here are some tips to help you.
First, why not to go and talk to people standing on their own? If you do this I am sure you will soon have the new friend. Second, you can begin the conversation by ask about their likes and dislikes. That way I will soon find people with the same interests. Finally, you should try to join a discussion. By doing this you were letting people know what friendly you are. It should certainly provides you with some new friends
I hope you find these ideas useful
Yours
Miss Wang
【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man requested on a wise man to help his son quit his bad habits. The wise man took the boy for walk in a garden. Stopping sudden he asked the boy to pull out a tiny plant. The boy held the plant between his thumb and forefingers and pulled it out. The man then asked him to pull out another plant which was slightly big. The boy pulled hard and the plant came up. “Now pull out that one,” said the man point to a bush. The boy tired his best but couldn’t pull it out. “So it is with bad habits” said the wise man. “When you are young, it is easy to pull them out, though when they take hold, they can be uprooted.”
【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now, few teenagers know how to cook. That is why many parents offer their children too much love and have them only work hardly at their lessons at home instead of doing anything else. It seems to them that their children are too busy their studies and that their children’s only task is to achieve high marks in the exams. So, the parents think their children needn’t to know something about cooking.
Therefore, I think students are supposing to learn how to cook. In that case, children can learn many skills by cooking, such as controling time wisely, knowing about the feature of vegetables and food supplies and so on. What’s more important is that cooking can help them understand how hardships their parents have experienced when raising them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the deepening of reform and opening-up of our country, many people dream going abroad for further study. They insisted that there are more modern research facilities, world famous professors and excellent environment in some foreign colleges and universities, what lay a perfect foundation for their future development. Besides, there are still many people who is in favor of studying at home. They argue that, for one thing, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore doesn’t pay off. For another, there are no language and cultural difficulties if they study in our country. Just as the old saying going, “Every advantage has its disadvantage,” so I believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students have the chances and financial resources, you should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their eyes. On the other hand, conditions not permitted, they can pursue their studies at top university in our country. It is not the place where they study but what they can learn in that counts.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In China handwriting was regarded as not only a basic skill, and a form of valuable cultural treasure. However, with the rise of digital technology, more and more students choose to type on computers and smartphones instead of writing by a hand, which as a result lead, to their poor handwriting. So measures must be taken improve the present situation. First, there should be handwriting lessons, especial in elementary and middle schools. Besides, schools should hold various handwriting competition to encourage the students to practice our handwriting skills. What’s more, every student should become aware that it is still with vital importance to develop their handwriting because computers and smartphones can be convenient and time-saving.