增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear fellow students,
As is known by us, our government is trying to make our city the National Civilized City at present. We hope we can also do our bit to help fulfill this goal.
First of all, we should mind our language and become civilized speakers. Always remember to say 'Please' and 'Thanks' and don't talk and laugh loudly in public. Seen people in trouble, we might as well lend them a helping hand. In addition, to be civilized pedestrians. We must obey traffic rules and never cross the streets before the traffic lights are red. Keeping our environment cleanly is also advisable, it means we shouldn't litter or spit in public places. Only by starting with the little things around us we make a great difference to our city image.
Let's take measure now and make joint efforts to make our city more civilized.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is said a chemical factory will be built near our school. I thought it wrong to do so. Although the factory will make a lot of money for our city, but it will do us more harm than good.
The drink water will be badly polluted. The airs over the city will be polluted, either. What's more, the chemical factory will be locate where we students play games and have sports after school. I fit is occupied, they will have no place for sports and fun. So we strong suggest that the government takes action to prevent the works from being built.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
It is common phenomenon（现象）nowadays what there are some persons disobeying traffic rules on the road. What's worse, many people always litters here and there in the streets, that is of our great concern. I have some specific ideas to share when it comes to handle these problems. I will observe traffic rules whenever I'm on my way to school. First or foremost, never will I cross a road until the traffic light turned green. Secondly, I will always use the zebra crossing. Thirdly, I will never throw aside rubbish or spit on the road. More important, it's necessary for everyone to increase awareness of safe travel. As the saying goes, “ Many hands make light work." Therefore, let's join hand to obey traffic rules, which will matter a lot.
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