2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled with great anxiety. However, I couldn’t be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approach me and said, “In life we all have moment when we can’t achieve what we want it. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire you.” Her words were a reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved.

So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.

This Friday afternoon,I was eager walking on my way home. Suddenly a shoe-shine man caught in my attention.He offered to get his shoes shined.While my shoes were not dirty, I sat down before him, give him an opportunity to earn money.In a moment,my shoes was shining. Before I leave, I gave him twice price for his work. Much to my surprise,he refused to take many than he should have.He then told me that he had grandchild at school, all with good academic performances. And he told me to work hard at my lessons, what I’d keep in my mind.

The old saying, “The early bird catches the worm,” show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, most people must plan ahead and work diligently to overcome all kind of difficulties.

That has been my own experience, either. When I first started high school, I seldom passed ray exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in the advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice onto practice, I can now easily pass all my exams. There are no shortcuts to succeed.

It was Sunday and I decided to sleep late. But it wasn't long after I realized that I had to get a reference book our teacher had ask us students to buy. I quick got up and headed for a bookstore, which was three block away. As I reached the store, I noticed that I left home without bringing any money. Although I was a little annoying with myself, I could do nothing but return home about the money. Therefore, I run all the way home to fetch the money. After a while, I returned to the store and bought book I wanted it. Imagine what relaxed I was.

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walked into my new high school. After registered (注册) in the classroom, I was taken to my dormitory by the volunteer. Altogether I had five roommate in my dormitory, two of which arrived later. I get to know them immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave to our hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.

My dream was to become a school teacher in the future. In fact，I have had the dream since my childhood. In my opinion，with teachers，no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an importantly role in children's growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge to children，but we also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs，teaching is hard and the pay is low. And to me，what a great fun it is to be with children！They make me feel young forever so I'll study hard and try my best realize my dream.