增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Joe,
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interesting in the Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get the wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses provided. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. Beside, a trip to the local Disneyland will certain add to the fun of the camp.
Join in the camp and you will know more about American culture and life. You are sure to benefit to it.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The summer vacation is coming, who makes me more than exciting. I am looking forward for it. My parents first plan to travel to Britain in order to improve my English. And because of my advice, we were decided not to travel abroad. Instead, we determined to relax locally. I want join a swimming club and swim for two hours every day. On the weekends, we will go climbing with my parents and watch some of my favorite movie. Also, I can play basketball with my classmates. I believe I will have a happily and different summer vacation!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的同.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, my parents and I have our family holiday in Hainan. Before the trip we booked plane tickets and the hotel where we were going to live in on the Internet and got some informations about the places we were going to visit. It was very hot in Hainan that neither of us could bear the heat. Lucky for us, it rained in the evening. The next day, we went to the seaside and lay on the beach, seen the beautiful scenery. On third day, we went shopping together and buying lots of seafood for our friends. Although the trip was short, they had great fun.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my friend and I go to a newly-opened supermarket and each of us bought a notebook for our English learning. After that, we went to a restaurant nearby to having lunch. The prices were a bit steep, but we thought it would worth it if the food was good. Sadly, we were disappointing. We waited for our food for over thirty minute. Our sausages were burnt and very dry that we couldn’t even cut them. His friend’s steak was even worse. Moreover, the carpet was out of date and wore, the chairs were very uncomfortable but the walls needed painting. I think we’ll never go to there again.
