增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a kid, I am inspired by people playing the guitar. Two years ago, there was a program in my school so I signed up as soon as possibly because I was really fond about it. After a week or 2 a paper was send to my mail box saying that I made it. I was extremely happy! Before I bought my first guitars I have practiced it every day for hours and hours. With time passing on, music started to become what I wish do best. Now I perform in many concerts and it is a fun. So if you have a hobby who is what you like doing, turn them into a talent and show the world what you do!
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Ming is one of my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometime he rented VCDs and watched it at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen. Now Li Ming is interested in collect stamps. He thinks it's great fun. He can learn a lot of about people, places, history and many another things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable. Last Friday was Li Ming's fifteen birthday. He gets many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’t understand “real music”. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed, and he became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Football is my favorite sport. I usual play football with my friends after school and join competitions. I have benefited a lot from play football. It helps me keep health and provides me with a way to relax me during stressful school days. Beside, I’ve become braver when facing challenges. It also teaches me good teamwork is the key to success and it has been brought me many friends with a same interest. Therefore, I suggest teenager do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose something what suits us.
