增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share with you about English writing.I once think it was rather difficult to write an English composition, and now I am confident that I can do a good job.Let me share my experience with you.
I have a notebook that I collect all of the good sentences I read in the books.I divide the notebook to several parts, such as Travel, Sports, Technology, School Life and so on.Then I write good sentences in every part.Most importantly, I read it every now and then so that I can remember more and more good sentences.As result, when I begin to write a composition, these sentences natural flow out.
I hope that my experience can help you.I also hope that I can learn many from everybody here besides.Thank you all.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among the challenge I faced during my high school years, one was how to overcome the fear of taking exams. I’m luckily enough to have overcome it. In the beginning, I was too worried about the results of exams that I had difficulty falling asleep at night. As result, I did badly in the exams. Noticed my problem, Mr. Li, my English teacher, talked to me patiently and encourages me not to worry about the results. His words relaxed him. Gradually, I overcame my fear and did well in the exams than ever before. Through this experience, I got to know what to settle a problem and that I should try my best to no matter what I do.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.
This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Marie,
I’ve been in Beijing for a month. I stay in a modern hotel which lie in the center of the city. I have visited many wonderful places, for example, Great Wall of China. I have also meet a lot of friend people here. Now I’m trying to learn Chinese from him and I am quite interesting in it.
Chinese food is really delicious but hot pot is my favorite. In China, it is interesting in to see people eating by chopsticks. I’m practising use them and I was getting more and more skilled now.
I want to come back again next year. I hope you can come with me.
