增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I am crazy about learning the violin. Therefore, I couldn’t understand “real music”. After I graduated at high school, a friend of me suggested that we should learn the guitar because of we both thought it was cool. I will never forget the day that we went to buy guitars in a guitar store. There I saw a guitar player played the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.
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What would life like without music? I wonder how music started and when we first become interested in music. Music is a essential part of my day. It changes my feelings and put me in a good mood. There’s nothing good to do on a train or bus than put on my headphones to listen to my favorite music. I like all types of music, from classical music and opera for jazz and rock. I’m always looking for something that sounds amazed. Sometimes I hear a song or some music on the radio or on TV I enjoy it very much. I always use my pockets money to pay online to download and saving the music.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My favourite hobby is a stamp collecting. When I was a schoolboy, I have been collecting stamps. The stamps are keeping in six fat books which is my most valuable things. The collection includes certain uniquely stamps of some foreign countries. There are several advantage of this hobby. It is interesting but educational. It is cheap and does not take a lot space or require expensive tools. Through collecting stamps I can travel the world and learned knowledge about various countries. In my spare time, I usually sit down with our collection of stamps, enjoying myself.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m a huge book lover but like sharing my love for books! So I’ve been bought books constantly. Finishing reading one book, I placed it in or around my school so that some of my schoolmate can treat themselves to the book. I especial like placing it on a stone table in the little garden in that students might have time to take a rest. I was delighted an other day when I saw a card left on the table to say thanks. And from the card, I knew my book turned out of to be a birthday gift for a strange girl. It was so lovely find out that my book could bring anyone pleasure!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I have one thing in common: we are all music lovers. My father loves sing as well as listening to music. Every morning, they will go to the park nearby and practise singing there. In the evening, when he usually enjoys music with my mother. He says music makes himself relaxed after a day’s work.
Unlike my father, I like playing a violin. I’m regarded as one of the best violinist in my school. I still remember I once invite my father to the music festival in my school where I played a beautiful piece music. I could see how proudly he was while I was playing. Music brings us together.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An activity themed “Student Talent Show" was held last week, thus attracted many students to participate. The activity was lasted from Monday to Saturday, during which time students with special talents signed up, prepared but competed well. The final competition fell on Saturday afternoon, when all the teens and child showed their great talents. Some presented her amazing singing voices when others showed their incredible dancing skills. What impressed us most was the one who danced from a rap music while playing a tongue twister. The activity had impact on everyone. It’ s entire believed that such an event will not only improve students’ ability but also promotes their love of life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Anthony, a 11-year-old boy, became famous after a video of him dance in the rain outside his home in Nigeria was put on the Internet. He impressed people from his enthusiasm. An Oscar-winning actor saw the video of Anthony and put them on his social media. He wrote, “We can be greatly passionate despite of the great difficulties that have put in front of us.” Anthony is a student at a dance academy in a poor district in Africa. The academy gives freely lessons to poor children that have somewhere to practice. The academy’s founder said, “We are changing people’s attitude towards male dancers.” Anthony said, “There are not male ballet dancers like me here. While people see ballet, they think it is only for girls, but I want to tell them there are also male ballet dancers.”