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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’ve learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for a receptionist. I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply the position.

First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from high school and taken the College Entrance Examination. I want to find a part-time job this summer, that I think will help enrich my social experience. I’m 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms of speaking and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school. Besides, I’m a quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.

I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

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Congratulation on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
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