增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Bob is my best friend. He has been my classmate for we were young. As one of the most popular students in our school, they possesses all the positive qualities that a good human being should had. For example, no matter who is in need of help, he is always ready lend a hand. He is also the quiet and sensitive boy who tried not to hurt anyone’s feelings. Every moment spent with him is quite enjoyable and relaxed. I really consider myself luckily to be blessed with such a friend. I believe with Bob company and inspiration, and I will become a better person in the future.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every weekend, I took my children to the park. I think it's a good way of them to meet other children and make friend .They like play on the swings, so they are always very exciting when we go to the park. They also like playing hide-and-seek with my little friends. I often make some cakes so that the children can eat when they is hungry. We often have a rest on the grass and have the lunch together. There is a small pond with a lot ducks in the park. All the children have greatly fun feeding them pieces of bread.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Joy,
How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I’d like to invite you to be my partners.
I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.
How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Zhang Xi
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Kate,
I'm glad to know that you will come to visit China and stop brief in my hometown. In the fact, I had a sleepless night when I know that I could see each other again. I always feel lucky to have a chance to meet you in the winter camp introducing by my teacher last year. Your smile but kindness brightened our days there. To make you enjoy your short visit, first, I will show you my beautiful hometown. Besides, I will go shopping with you in a big market sold various local product. I also hope to hold a party for you after you leave.
I'm looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
