增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I remember that I love reading and creating fairy stories in my childhood. I spent many evening in my room alone writing stories. I lived in them and could almost see which I was writing about. Once, I was shocking when my mom went into my room all of sudden. After that, she was always knocked at the door softly to avoid disturb me. When we moved to a new home a few years before, I put my old writings in a box. I treasure those stories, because they show that I had a wonderful imagine as a kid. In fact, I take pride of what I did in my childhood.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was still young in my high school, my mother dragged me to play basketball to lose weight. Therefore, it turned out to be a bitter failure because I devoted my time on study. One day, a friend of me contacted me and suggested that we start to swim. Without any hesitation, I agreed because we all thought that it was coolest thing in the world. I couldn’t forget the day on that I was thrown into the cold water. Fortunately, I survived. Honest speaking, I had a hard time recovered from the shock. Then my friend teaches me to hold my breath underwater. Finally, I succeeded. Now realizing that having sports are beneficial to my health, I develop a strong taste for swimming, which becomes part of my life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my spare time, I often read some books written by famous writers in or abroad. I ever read China’s Four Great Classical novel such as The Journey to the West. Beside, I enjoy reading Poetry of the Tang History.
I have been veiling from I was nine years old. I am remember the first time my parents and I talked about my dream of becoming writer. They laughed out happy when they read the short story I write about robots. They think that my story is well worth read and that I am good at writing. I believe I will achieve their dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best help making the Games a success.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains.He had five key chains and asked for me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this build a house?” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his hungry tonight” I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave her a smiley (微笑符) key chain back as a gift, but his smile was sweet. I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be successfully if you win a smile from someone.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month the Students' Union of our school organized English Speech Competition. At first I didn't show some interest and wasn't very much confident. Then my English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. The time I had been looking forward to coming two weeks later. That was my turn. Glancing at my teacher's smiling face, I build up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.
Without my teacher's encouragement, I couldn't have won the first prize. I'm proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I read the book about how successful persons started their careers and succeeded. They met a number of difficulty and problems, such as lacking money and experience and arguing with their co-workers, they were not afraid of restarting again. Though they met many problems, some of that were even bigger than they could imagine, they still insist on what they had believed. They were unbeatable, so they succeeded in eventually. This book impresses me deep. Besides, from them stories, I learn that I should ever give up achieving my dreams no matter what happens. I wish my friends could read the book and get inspiring, too.
