增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the holiday, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left a deep impression on me. To avoid waste time buying a ticket on the spot, I made a reservation online. I got my ticket from machine without difficulty and start the exploration. I was deep attracted by the grand architecture. To my excite, I could scan the QR codes to get detailed informations. With the VR glasses on, I even found me back to the time when the palace was under construction. How impressive! I found the Forbidden City both traditional or modern because of our history is made alive here.
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I went to the bank to withdraw money yesterday. Seeing several people wait at the ATM machine, I queued up. When it was my turn, I reached into my pocket for my bank card, only to find anything wrong. What the shame! How could I mistake my ID card as the bank card? All what I could do was go back home for it. Half an hour late, I returned to the ATM machine. Following the instruction, I typed my password, but I was told it was wrong. After typing several times, I discovered the card was be swallowed. I had no choice but solve the problem the next day. I was determined to break my habit of being carelessly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, we had a picnic with my uncle’s family in a park. It was a warmly sunny day and there were many tourists. They took various fruits and delicious cookies with us. After we eat our picnic lunch by the lake, my parents sat on the ground talk about the work stuff and family issues with my uncle and aunt. Meanwhile my cousins and I was playing around. I suggested going to the fairground to riding on a roller coaster. It was too exciting that we screamed in terror. Then, we played some other interesting game. Before sunset, we returned to home happily. What unforgettable experience!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to England last summer as exchange student, and stayed there for three months. I used to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. Besides, I was surprised to find their projects were more diverse（多种多样的）. I made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, which was a college student. He was a member of different kinds of clubs, so I took the chance to join in some clubs, too. Can you believe I make a robot in the LEGO Club? I felt very proudly because I got first prize with my Lego robot.
Time spent in England is such unforgettable that I will treasure it forever.
