增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, during the vacation I am working as a volunteer in a home for the aged. After a conversation for a nurse and a social worker, I was told my job was to talk old people, take them out for walks and read them newspapers and books. All that might sound a bit bored, but jut after a few days it turned out to be quite difference. They accepted me as if that I were their friend. They have told him their life stories and given me some advices about life. I have learned so many from them. This was a amazing experience for me.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.
The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.
I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others. What's worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Julie was at a crossroads. She has just graduated from university and was not ready to begin life as an independence adult. She had already received some great job offer from several major companies. While cleans out her dormitory room on her last day at university, she received a unexpected phone call. The caller introduced him as representing an international association. He had met Julie a few weeks ago at a job fair (招聘会) and was impressing with her spoken English. The only difficulty was his company was in the country of Colombia. Julie was curiously to find out more, so she booked a flight to South America.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember how I become a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing the table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Late on, I often watched them carefully learn their techniques. Then I kept practiced until I became confident enough to challenge him. At the end of the term I became one of the best player in my class.
I am really proud in this experience. It helps me realize what we all can fulfill our potential and have our goals achieve through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to England last summer as exchange student, and stayed there for three months. I used to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. Besides, I was surprised to find their projects were more diverse（多种多样的）. I made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, which was a college student. He was a member of different kinds of clubs, so I took the chance to join in some clubs, too. Can you believe I make a robot in the LEGO Club? I felt very proudly because I got first prize with my Lego robot.
Time spent in England is such unforgettable that I will treasure it forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11 处起) 不计分。
I still remember the day when I first learned to ride bike. It was a frightening yet fun experiences. My granddad was the one which taught me. When I got on the bike for the first time, I had no idea how I was doing. My granddad promises me that he would hold onto the back of the bike the whole time, but he didn’t. As soon as I started trying to balance myself, she let it go. I was such scared that I fell off the bike and began crying. He kept encourage me to get up and try again. Before about one hour, I was finally mastered the art of riding a bike.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During my summer vacation last year, I participated some social activities. With the help of my English teacher, I eventually got a part-time job in the city library — four morning a week. I sometimes stay there longer because there were too many readers. It was a temporarily job and I only had a two-month contact with a library. The working hours suited me as mine vacation was just two months long. Although I didn't earn a big salary, and yet I really enjoyed the atmosphere there. That I liked most about my job was working in complete silent. The only noise hearing by me was that of people turning pages while reading.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother and I was driving home but took a wrong turn. Unfortunately, the wrong turn took us towards a bridge. As the result, we had no choice but to turn back, which was really annoyed. At that time, we noticed a black car which driver was a young guy. The guy was standing nearby trying to phone to someone. My brother pulled over immediate, asking if he needed assistances. He said he did because he had a flat tire. So my brother helps him change the tire. He pulled out a $20 bill and tried to give to us. But we refused. My brother said, “I now know how we took a wrong turn. It was to help you.” We all laughed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my friend and I was taking a walk on the playground when a girl came ride a bike at a very high speed. Then we heard a loud scream, that attracted our attention. We turned around and saw the girl struggling her feet, crying out for help. My friend and rushed towards her as quick as we could and had helped her to stand up. Therefore, the girl rode away immediately without saying “Thank you”. I felt disappointing at her behavior. To my surprise, the girl came back with hot drinks several minute later. Seeing this, I knew I had misunderstood her and felt ashamed of me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Time spent in a bookshop can be most enjoyable. Here is a moving story about it. Once there was a medical student wanted to read a textbook which was far too expensive to buy it. The only copy he could find was in a bookshop, but he couldn’t afford it. So that he could do was to read it in the shop. Every afternoon, he goes to the shop and read some of the books at a time. One day, however, he found the book missed from its usual place. So disappointed, he was about to leave when he noticed an owner of the shop signaling to him. To their surprise, the owner pointed to the book, which was good put away in a corner. And he added that he put it there for case anyone else attempted to buy it.
