假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m fond of sweet food, bread in the particular. When it come to my ideal job, I do have an urge to running a bakery. In order to make full preparation for it, I’ve made my mind to major in food science and engineering. The bread make in my bakery must be free from harmful chemicals. What we all know, nothing is more important than healthy. I’ll also offer some bread to starving people on a regularly basis. Now it’s high time that I must study hard to pursue my sweet dream.
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m a freshman in senior high school. Therefore, I am faced with several new challenge. The first thing I need to do is decide whether I should choose a art major or a science major. But there are so much subjects I am not familiar that I can’t make a good decision right now. Besides, I couldn’t adapt to the new learning environment. Used to listening to the teachers and remember all the facts, I’ve found that difficult to study on my own. But at senior high, we must further develop our learning methods what can help us move forward and go to our dream colleges. Although I feel a bit of upset, I determine to face these problems brave and create a bright future for myself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer holiday is coming. Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenience and comfortable. What’s more, they can to save money for other purposes. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world. Besides, others prefer to go out for traveling, that can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money or meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much good to stay at home, for I can do how I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and help my parents with the housework.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How are you? I’m writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.
We’ll still meet at my school, but not in Saturday as usual, since I’ll have to participated in a sporting activity that day. So let’s make three o’clock on Sunday afternoon.
As you know, in order to acquire a good knowledges of Chinese, you should learn more about Chinese culture and history. Therefore, this time I would introduce Tang Poetry to you, what is of great help in learning Chinese. I advise you to learn about the briefly history of the Tang dynasty in the advance. It will surely help me learn the poems.
Look forward to hear from you soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We are in the last year of high school. It’s time for us to have clear future career plan. Since my childhood, I had been dreaming of becoming a doctor. When knows Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize, I was great inspired by her to learn medicine. Especially this year, the spirit of doctors has hardened our determination to study medicine to save people’s lives. It is their wisdom and efforts which have saved tens of thousand of people. Difficult though it is to make my dream to come true, something will stop me achieving it. I will concentrate on my study to get ready to my future major in college.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After the college entrance exam, it’s essential for me to think about what I would like to do in the future. Actually, facing with diverse choices, I got lost at first. Consequently, I have a talk with my older sister which is more experienced than me the other day, and her words did inspire me. With his help, I found that things related to English never fail to interest me. Thus, I made up of my mind to spare no effort to be a translator. Apparently not only can a translator have the chance to have a command of various cultures around the world, and also he can spread the culture of his own country. It’s so a charming job that it is worth try. And I’m firm convinced I’ll make it through my hard works eventually.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every time my mother and I started to have a conversation, it turns into an argument. We talk about something so simple as dinner plans. Sudden, my mother will push the conversation into the topic of her best friend’s son, that graduated from Tsinghua University last year. He is now earning 100,000 yuan a year as the engineer. In fact, I don’t want to do any job related science like him. I don’t know what to explain my plan to my mother. I’m the type of person who love to help out in the community. I even want to make a career of it because of I love it so much. I’d rather following my dreams and create my own future.
