增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m Zhang Lei from China. I’m easy-going and warm-hearted, which makes its easy for me to make new friends. Energetic and responsible, I am a captain of our school football team. Reading is that I really love, both for fun and knowledge.
If I’m luckily enough to be chosen as chairman of the Students’ Union, I will spare no effort to live on to your expectations. More colourful after-school activities will be organized, which will definitely reduced pressure but enrich our school life. Consider we are studying in an international middle school, communication should be given priority. So an international club will set up, thus enhancing the understanding between the students from different country.
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【推荐1】When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was lucky enough to study abroad as an exchange student, but this allowed me to improve my language skills and found out more about the local culture. It was my active participation which helped me make the friends in a foreign country. Instead staying in my room, I got out of the house so as not to be homesick. I’ll never forget the times when I first went camping with my friends. I also tried something entire new such as a dance class and a walking club. In addition, I tried to make my voice hearing as much as I could. As a result, everyone wanted to know something about myself. Consequently, I made much good friends.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother and me planned to go to Chengdu by high-speed train last Saturday morning. Dad took us to the train station by car. When we arrive there, I couldn’t find my ID card. Learn this, Dad took me home immediately. We looked the card everywhere, yet we didn't End it. I was really sad because I couldn't get my ticket without my ID card. But after a few minutes, and I found it. It was in one of the pocket of my coat! We drove back to a station. That Dad told me all the way was that I should being careful with everything. Lucky,I was on lime to go with Mum.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10处,多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games is needed.I’m writing to apply to this position. As native of Beijing, I think it is a privilege and dutyfor me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promoting Chinese culture. I believe I’m equally to the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players guidance and help as requiring. What’s more, I have a knowledge of winter sports, which they will prove helpful in communicating with players. Additionally, I had been involved in several international exchange programs, but enjoy spreading our culture to foreigners.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunities. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The reasons why I expect to studying in your university are as follows. The thing occur to me first is its excellence in finance, which I am interested in it as my major. Varieties of strengths allow me the courage apply for admission. Firstly, good social skills and strong organizing ability are that I have acquired in high school thanks for the experience of serving as monitor. I have learned to keep the good balance between work and study. I also get the award of Outstanding Student Leader last year. Besides, I have several hobby, such as dancing, playing erhu, and playing badminton. I will feel great honored if I can be admitted.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How are you doing? I am now working like a student editor of my school’s English website and in charge of a new column calling After-school Life. It reports diversity after-school events and activities from home and abroad broaden students’ horizons. I wondered if you could do me a favor and record some of your after-school events. If be possible, please send me some picture and videos about your thrilling activities. The more, the better, of course! By a way, do you have time to visit your website www. hongxinghighschool. com? I would appreciate it if you can tell me that you think of it. Thanks a lot!