增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play, that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I was used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class, I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains, no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. But my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing faces and only in this way can we make progresses.
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We hold different view on whether students should start a blog on the Internet. Some believe it can provide with a colorful stage for students to show their talents. Also, it’s nice way to help them relieving pressure. However, other have an opposite opinion over it. They thought managing a blog will take much time and energy. Personally, I do agree that students should have their won blogs. Nowadays, the Internet is playing an important role to our life. As high school students, it’s necessary to learn and make the most of it. In fact, if it’s good or bad depends on how we use it. If we can take fully advantage of it but avoid its negative effects, we can surely benefit a lot from it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two years before, I joined the Youth Community. I knew it was my chances to make a big change. I took that opportunity and made full use it. The community encouraged me and was showed me what life was really about. It also teaches me basic life skills. I believe that one person who believes in you help to change your life. Work hard for the community complete turned my life around. Our confidence grew and I could deal with different types of people in different situations, who helped me become the kind of person I wanted to be.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known to all, hunger is a seriously problem, especially in the developing countries. For order to solve the problem, people across world have done a lot. There are hundred of successful stories from all over the developing world, showed that a lot is being done to fight poverty. But the fact is what the fight is not over. Poverty is still killing people. However, these small victories is a good start towards a better future. It is not the result of giving a man a single fish and the result of teaching a man to be fish.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last night I was having a shower in the bathroom at about 10:30 while the silence was broken down by some unusual noises outside. I quickly got dressing and ran out of the bathroom, only find a big fire on the third floor of our flat building. Luckily, most of the people, including my family, have left the building by the time the firefighters arrived. But a baby along with his parents were still trapped in a flat on the fourth floor. The firemen were true great. Some put out the fire but the others managed to rescue the parents and their baby. We are really grateful for the brave firefighters who risked their own lives to save ourselves.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My first stay at home alone was very memorable. One day when I was twelve, both of my mother and father were away on the business, and I had to be all with myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, I got up soon after they left. The first evening I was a little scare, so I turned on all the lights. I actually keep the light on in my bedroom the whole night, that finally put me at ease. For fear of get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clock near my bed and set the alarm respectively at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of me, I washed my own clothes the next day, though I could wait for Mum to do it. I really felt proudly of myself and thought I had grown up.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday will live in my memory forever. It was the first time that I performed Latin dance with a classmate on stage.
After I changed into my suit, I stood quietly,waited for our turn. Once on stage, I am afraid of looking at the audience. Then the music began,but we started to dance. Absorbed on what I was doing, I began to feel good. Finally,it was over. We did a good job.
Through this experience, I realized I was not only putting on a show for another,but also learned why to deal with a challenge. Now when I face a new situation, I am not as nervously as I was before. I know by practising it I can achieve everything.
