About two years ago, I worked hard and entered a locally key school, which my parents were proud of it. From then up, I got up early and got to the school on time. After school, I went back home in time to help my parents do some housework while enjoy some light music. However, one day my mother persuading me to live at school to learn to be independent, preparing the future life. As I was unhappy, I understood my parents and followed their advices. Before living at school, I found it helped me save time and learn what to get on with others.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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As the summer holiday came, I felt excited because my mother has found a job in a printing shop for myself. This was my first job and it was good chance for me to gain experience. But I took it seriously. However, the boss let me do the cleaning in the first several day. I felt disappointedly at first but cheered up soon. I learned what to do the printing work while watch others using the machine. I learned very quickly and the boss even praised for me. Though I didn’t get much salary at last, I was pride of myself.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper. I’m written this letter to apply for the position.
I’m Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements: for one thing I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.
I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.
The biggest challenge I have overcome is stepping out of my comfort zone. In the year of 2017 when I was 15, I joined an exchange student program. I sent to Germany alone and lived with the host family.
At first it was a huge failure for me. Thanks for my host mom, I adapted myself to the new surroundings gradually. She told me some tip on making friends, such as joining a sports club and invited my classmates to watch a movie. Surprising, all of the tips she gave me work! She also suggested that I can introduce my culture to my classmates. To my astonish,they were all interesting in Chinese culture.
Eventually, my discomfort zone became a part of my comfort zone.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! It’s my great honor to be there and I am very happy to see you all. I’d like tell you something about our school. The school was found in 1915. It has a history of more than 100 years. At the first it was a school for boys and girls were rare allowed to enter it. Now there are about 3,000 students in our school, most of who are living and having meal at school. Our teachers were the first-class teachers in our city. We love their students and their teaching work. I’m pleasing to be your guide during your visit.
That’s all. Thank you!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here who comes of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I felt unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talk to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger right away. I am trying to improve the situation and it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me something which I should do it ?
Yours
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.
You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is no longer that it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings have been built and are in use. One of which is a new teaching building, where there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where we can read different kind of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. A number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What’s more, we have planted a lot trees and flowers in and around the school.
I believe my school will become better and better, but I hope you will visit my school again.
