增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I was really exciting when my dad told me that a British girl was coming to our house for several day. I thought she would be typical western girl with blond hair and blue eyes. But when I step out of my room, I was surprised to find a Chinese girl smiling sweetly at me and greet me in poor Chinese. She told to me that she was born in England and couldn’t speak much Chinese. We got along well and I showed her many wonderfully things in Chinese culture. She was very happy and kept ask questions. Time passed very quickly that before we knew it, it was time for me to leave. And I saw her off at the airport.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, Uncle Wang often paid a visit to our house. He was a great fun and often had us laughing by tell different stories. Besides, he liked tickling me until I could hardly breathe for laughing. It annoyed him much. My sister said it was the ways Uncle Wang treated every kid. One day when Uncle Wang visited us again, I hide in my room willing to see him. Finally, my mom came to ask the reason. And she told me that I had the right to say no to whomever made me uncomfortable. Uncle Wang apologized me for what he had done when I told him my really feeling.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误仅限1词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week,our class invited an old granny to teach us how to made paper cuts.When the granny came into the classroom,we gave her warm welcome and two girls helped her with the tool box.First,she show us the basic steps and skills of paper cutting.We stood around her or watched attentively.Then we began to have a try themselves.The granny walked around and helped us with great patient.Finally we were put the paper-cuts,where were made with our own hands,on the table and took pictures with the old granny.Looking on our work,we were all very exciting.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several times along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stop. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词;
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tim,
Realizing I might have behaved rude when receiving your gift at my birthday party, I’m writing to say sorry. I’m grateful to have received such nice a present. According to the Chinese tradition, I say “thank you” that day. But I didn’t tear up the package in your presences. As is known to all, Americans are used to open the package of a gift for the moment it is received. It wasn’t until my mum mentioned it when I realized my inappropriate behavior. So please forgive me for your thoughtlessness. This incident serves as reminder that learning cultural differences are a most important thing for me.