【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world and about human beings. Knowledge is a source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge. I know the college education can prepare me better for my future. Better education meant, in my opinion, better jobs, better opportunity and better choices. I want to go to college because I know that my parents and other people who cares for me will be happily with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make them happier. I’d hate to let you down. That’s the reason why I must go to college.

【推荐2】请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi Brad,

It’s so good to write to you again, after two years. Now I have graduated in Senior High School and had been admitted into a university in Shanghai. I feel very exciting to start my new life. Therefore, I am a little nervous, for my hometown, where is in Shanxi, is far from Shanghai. What I feel homesick there? And I don’t know that whether I can get on well with my roommates. Besides, I don’t know what to adapt to the new environment quick. What should I do to get preparing for my college life?

Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours

Edith

【推荐3】短文改错
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is well-known that good habits do us good. Entered high school, I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so serious overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. To my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.

【推荐1】短文改错
Dear Tom，

It's my honor to share my dream university to you. I'm glad to tell you that my dream university is Peking University，that is one of the best university in the world.

There are several reasons why I like Peking University. At first，it had first-class teachers and equipment, which will help me make the progress quickly. Secondly, it is famous for their positive academic atmosphere, where students study hardly to meet new challenges. But at last, my brother, who studies there, says he is very satisfying with the university.

It's not easy enter Peking University, but I think my dream will come true if I work hard. Could you tell me something about your dream university?

Yours,

Li Hua

【推荐2】短文改错

My dream was to become a school teacher in the future. In fact，I have had the dream since my childhood. In my opinion，with teachers，no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an importantly role in children's growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge to children，but we also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs，teaching is hard and the pay is low. And to me，what a great fun it is to be with children！They make me feel young forever so I'll study hard and try my best realize my dream.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My dream school starts at 9 am ends at 4 pm. There were three lessons in the morning and two on the afternoon. We don’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activity. My dream school look like a big garden and all kinds of flowers and trees are around them. After class, we walk on campus and enjoy the flowers as well as. The teachers here are friendly and helpfully. They are not only our teachers and also our friends.