增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I worked as public health nurse in a very poor city in Florida .I was often very kind to my patients, especial the old people. On New Year’s Day as I was cooking dinner to my family, I thought of some old people, They were my patients which were always alone at home So I decide to cook more and deliver hot meal to them .When I saw my two sons play in the house happily, but I made them stop. And I asked them to help me pack and deliver these meals, As we took the food into our houses, the old people were very moving and we saw tears of joy in their
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Rowing boats are always a fun activity for me. Last summer I went to Hainan with my father and spent a week there. We stayed in a hotel which was short distance from the sea. On the five day, my father hired a boat. Look around, I found there were not many more boats on the sea. I wanted to row of my own, but my father was afraid to let us do that. He didn’t agree unless later a boatman came and helpfully taught me how to row. I was very pride when I was finally able to row the boats and keep it on course.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词尾（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a freezing winter night. I pulled myself along the way before a long day’s work stand behind the counter. an empty stomach and only ten-dollar note and a few pennies in the pocket, my life seemed hopelessly. Despite the warm Christmas atmosphere, my heart was frozen to dead. “Excuse me, Madam. Would you please be too kind as to give a few pennies? The little angels will appreciate for it.” A sweet voice rise behind me. I turned and found a plain-looking girt with two abandoned dogs. Without hesitations, I handed over the note in my pocket. Cheerfully the girl wait away and she would never know how she saved my day and my life.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
The long-desired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announcing the end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Li Ming and I were on the way back home. The train we took was such crowded that we had to stand. We both felt exciting because we had four week to stay with our parents. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. Under the help of Li Ming, I caught the thief and forced her to give back the purse to the old lady. The thief was taken away by the guard. Praising by other passengers, we felt proudly of what we had done.
