增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, many students are like to pursue famous brands. This phenomenon has aroused widely attention. The following reasons can account on students’ preference for famous brands.
Above all, in many students' eyes, an famous brand is a symbol of taste. They expect others to admire his high-class and good taste. What's more, in modern society, famous brands to some extents are equal to fashion, and it always appealed to teenagers a lot. I think it is unreasonable for students pursue famous brands. Beside, it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really make him high-class.
Many people have strong view about the use of school uniforms. There are arguments both for or against it. On the one hand, uniforms stop other students judge them on how they look, as everybody will look more or less same. Besides, it saves parents’ money as they don’t have to buy for new school uniforms every year and their children only need clothes on weekends and holidays. On the other hand, though some parents said that wearing uniforms is a way of saving money, other say uniforms are not cheap. Children are constant growing up and need big sizes. In my opinion, wearing uniforms is a good thing because no one stand out and it looks smarter.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Square dancing is becoming increasingly popular nowadays, that can be easily found in public places like squares and parks. The dancers gather in the large numbers and dance some joyful music happily. Therefore, not everyone is happy with this. Some people complain the music is too noisy that it affects their life serious. But I don’t agree with them. On the one hand, most of the dancers are retire women. By dancing, they can make more friend and enjoy their life after retirement. On the other hand, the places they chose are public, so everyone has the right to enjoy them there.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A film called Better Days, which reflects the reality of school bullying, becoming a hit and raises concern of a large number of people. There is no doubt that school bullying causes to serious impacts on those involving. And it is of great harm to teenagers both physically but mentally. So serious is the situation which some victims even choose to commit suicide to escape to the reality. Under this condition, it was high time that the teachers as well as parents and people from all walk of life took responsibility to address the problem effectively. All in all, students should be given a safely and peaceful place to study. It is hoped that there will be end of school bullying.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The idea of sustainable development has accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development is of a big problem facing our planet. The present situation is worried. First, natural resources is becoming fewer than before. Second, as some people are not aware of the important of the environmental protection, the problems with it remain extreme serious to some degree. To their great joy, many country have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and regulations but put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. On an other hand popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out. As for me, I should take the responsibility to devote me to sustainable development.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school has had a survey on reading. It shows that 55 percent of the students spend our time reading textbooks after school. Only 10 percent enjoy read literature. Why? They don’t have enough time because of they have too many homework to do. Some students complain that literary works are such thick that they hardly have enough patience to finish them. Others who only concentrate on what to get high scores simply admit that reading literature won’t help them with their exams. What’s more, some students showed no interest in literature. As a matter of fact, books play important role in our life. Not only can reading make us feel relaxing, but also it help us learn the customs and cultures in the past and at present at home and abroad.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of the financial crisis, the situation of the employment have become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western areas of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not very fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west may be bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is good for both our personal development and our country at present.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, it is rather obviously that chasing stars had become a trend among young people. Regarding as this phenomenon, I’d like to express my own opinion.
On the one hand, it can be waste of time and money to chase stars, especially when you go to concerts or buy related products. However, it may distract your attention, that has a bad influence on your studies. On the other hand, seeking the strength of the stars may help you become a better person, especially if the“star” is a role model such as a scientist and a doctor.
In short, chasing stars is a double-edged sword. If handle properly, it is greatly beneficial to a youngster. If not, they may cause bad consequences.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the mountains in southwest China lie my village. Although the climate and landscape are delighted, people lead a tough life there. At the beginning of the 21st century, the government began to attach great importance with its development, under the influence of that people’s living conditions began to improve. A lot of roads were built and plenty of trade centers were newly found, which made them convenient to develop economy. What’s more, with a great many students admit into famous universities, the education has been improving. In a word, thanks to the government’s firmly support, great changes have been taken place in the past few years. I believe that through everyone’s effort, we will continue to make difference in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
Many students are unwilling to do housework at home, say that they are too busy studying. However, in my opinion, students should spent some time helping with housework. Here are some reason. If we left all the housework to our parents, it will make them very much tired. For our part, being independent is really benefit. As a matter fact, the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. Doing housework can help us to learn to look after us. Now we are no long small children, but we ought to help with housework to reduce our parents’ burdens.
