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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. As for me, Marie Curie was the person I respect most. It is general acknowledged that Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientist in the world. Her discoveries are crucial to the later scientific research.
Marie Curie was interesting in science when she was young. After she graduated from university, she committed himself to her work with the objective of serve the whole society. Marie and her husband found the element radium, for that they were awarded the Nobel Prize. Not only was Marie the first female professor at the University of Paris, but she was also the first scientist win two Nobel Prizes in the world.
Madam Curie was intelligent, brave, strong-willed but never gave up. To sum up, she is a person I respect her most.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tu Youyou, a famous female chemist and scientist, was been born in Zhejiang Province in 1930.
In 1951, she was admitted by Beijing University, majoring in making medicine and graduating in 1955. Since then, she has been devoted to study traditional Chinese medicine and modern western medicine. In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing Qinghaosu out of a Chinese herb cure those patients of malaria, for what she won many big awards. She is awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine on October 5th, 2015, becoming the first Chinese women scientist to win the Nobel Prize.
All of us Chinese are proudly of her and her achievements. She has indeed set the excellent example to us students.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, the father of hybrid rice---Yuan Longping cultivated hybrid rice and fed millions of people all over world. He was one of the greatest scientist in China. Unluckily, he pass away at the age of 91,in May 22,2021.However,her dream will always inspire many people. His dream was that he could enjoy the shade under the hybrid rice. There is no doubt that dream is very much important. As for myself, I would like to become a usefully person like Yuan Longping which did valuable contribution. What I can do is that I will study hardly and learn more knowledge. I hope I can achieve my dream one day but I will never give up my dream no matter how difficult it is.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多于的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（ 从第11处起）不计分。
Today I will introduce three famous musician in the world. Known as “ the father of the symphony”, Joseph Haydn was an Austrian composer. It was him that changed the symphony into a long piece for a large orchestra. Hayden used to working at the court of a prince in eastern Austria, there he became a director of music. Having worked there for 30 years, he moved to London and became very successfully there. Mozart was another well-known Austrian composer, possibly the greater musical genius of all time. He passed away at an early age and composed no more than 600 pieces of music. Haydn met Mozart in 1781 and was very impressive with him. The third famous musician I will introduce is Beethoven, who was born in Bonn, Germany. He moved to Vienna and stayed there for rest of his life. As he grew older, he began to go deaf. Even when he was complete deaf, he continued composing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Helen Keller was one of the greatest woman in the 20th century. She was born in 1880 and dies in 1968. When she was 19 months old, she became blind and deaf because a serious illness. From then on she lived in darkness and silent.
When she was seven, her parents found out a teacher, Miss Sullivan, for her. Although Miss Sullivan had trouble teach her, they overcame all the difficulties which they met. With Helen's strongly will, she became a top student. Finally she received an university degree in English literature. Late on, she was devoted to helping the blind and deaf children.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The man inspiring me most is Qian Xuesen, who is known for the father of China’s space technology and died at age of 98 in 2009.
After graduate from university in 1934, Qian went to the US for further education. After the PRC was found, he returned back to China to help develop China’s national defense. He gave all their life to China’s aerospace science and technology and make great achievements. He set up China’s first missile-and-rocket research institute, that later helped start China’s space program.
There is no doubtful that he will be remembered by the Chinese forever for his great contribute.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Seeing there were so many farmers struggled to feed themselves, the scientist decide to devote his life to helping keep the world free of hunger. Since then, he has been leading happy life, though many people can’t understand his behavior.
He always works on the farm, chatting with the farmer, which it can account of his sunburnt face. He as well as his team was awarding many honors. Besides, they are not satisfying with the present achievements. They hold the belief which the more they devote, the few pepole go hungry.
