增加:在缺词处加一个漏宇符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear friends,
I, on behalf our school, would like to express our warm welcome to Mr. Ken Hyland, our distinguished guest. We are lucky to have him to visit our school.
Which is known to us all, being a world famous English linguist, he had written lots of books. I have read many of his books, included Discourse Studies, Teaching and Researching and so on. Today, the remarkable professor is invited to our school to deliver a lecture on English study, which is a opportunity for us to promote our English. Meanwhile, if you have any questions on English, you can ask him for help. I do believe his shining ideas will be benefit to you.
We wish you, all the guest here, good health and a pleasant journey. Now a wonderful lecture from Mr. Ken Hyland is eager expected and let’s express your sincere welcome once again.
文中共有 10 处语言 错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The person I would like to interview him is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only one of the greatest astronaut in the world but also the first Chinese go to space. I have long been interesting in space exploration. And I believe I could learn a greatly deal from him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him that made him become an astronaut or how he was trained. I would also like to know how he feel in space and whether space travel is as exciting as what is describing in some books. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about their personal life, which must be very different.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dr Yuan Longping is a agricultural pioneer in China.He graduates from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.Since then he has devoted himself to find ways to grow more rice.The rice farmers are now producing twice as larger harvests as before by using the kind of rice he bred.But he is not satisfied with his work.Although now he leads a rich life,but he still insists on his work to develop his rice.I think his work is real important to the world.Because of he hard work,the production of food been improved.Thanks for Yuan Longping’s research,we have more tools in the battle to rid the world of hungry.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Isaac Asimov was a American scientist and writer. He wrote around 480 books where included mystery stories, science and history books. But he was better known for his science fiction stories. He had an extraordinarily imagination. It gives him the ability to explore future worlds. Besides, he searched explanations of everything, in the present and the past, with an amazed mind.
Throughout his life, Asimov received much awards. He was married two. He married his first wife in 1942 and married again in 1973. In 1992, she died in New York.
缺词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并写出该词;
多词: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉;
错词: 在错词下划一横线, 并写出改正后的词。(答案写在答题纸上)
例如: One of my favorite writers are Charlotte Bronte. She was born in the early nineteenth is century when women had far fewer opportunities ^ they have now. She lived in a than small village in Yorkshire and she took great pleasure in walking on the moors where near her home. |
A concert violinist went to New York City to play at Carnegie Hall. It was his one visit to the city, so he got lost on the way from his hotel to the concert. After wandering up or down several streets, he decided to ask for directions. “Excuse me,” he said to a woman on the corner. “How do I get to Carnegie Hall?” The woman looked at the man hold his violin case and answered, “Practice, practice, practice.”
In this old joke, “get to Carnegie Hall” has two meanings: (1) arrive at the building called Carnegie Hall; (2) reach the top of the music profession, symbolized by Carnegie Hall. To perform at Carnegie Hall is a honor for any musician. It’s the highlight of his or her career. It true takes a lot of practice and hard work to be good enough to play at Carnegie Hall.
Carnegie Hall was built by Andrew Carnegie, one of the richest men of his time. It opened in May of 1891. It’s famous for its superb acoustics (音响设计), which make it a wonderful place to both perform and listen to music-all type of music. The famous Russian composer Tchaikovsky played there, and so do the Beatles.
Since the opening night over 100 years ago, many prominent classical, jazz, and pop musicians performed at Carnegie Hall. No matter what they arrived on the night of their performances such as by subway, taxi, or on foot, they all got to there by dedication to their art, talent-and practice, practice, practice.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Science fiction is one of the most appealing topic. It can open our minds to things we might see them in the future. Liu Cixin is my favorite sci-fi author. He had written some famous novels, among that is The Three-Body Problem. His grand view of the world or new scientific terms absorb me. I have referred many materials to understand the terms in his novels. My knowledge is consequently expanded by do so. His visions for the future is very attractive because he makes them appear as the extension of reality around us. Readers always think serious about the idea of a community with a sharing future for mankind after reading his stories.
7 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. As for me, Marie Curie was the person I respect most. It is general acknowledged that Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientist in the world. Her discoveries are crucial to the later scientific research.
Marie Curie was interesting in science when she was young. After she graduated from university, she committed himself to her work with the objective of serve the whole society. Marie and her husband found the element radium, for that they were awarded the Nobel Prize. Not only was Marie the first female professor at the University of Paris, but she was also the first scientist win two Nobel Prizes in the world.
Madam Curie was intelligent, brave, strong-willed but never gave up. To sum up, she is a person I respect her most.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A Chinese teenager make history on Aug 21, 2023. The 14-years-old, Chen Yujie, set a new record with the girl’s 100 meters. Chen takes Su Bingtian as his role model but says she will continue working hard. It only took Chen three years to go from a ordinary student to a world champion. Apart from her nature talents, Chen is also a good example of why running is a sport can be taken up at any age. Compare to athletes in other sports, like a gymnast who might start training at age 4 or 5, Chen entered into the sports world at 11.
增加:把缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Qi Baishi (1946-1957) was one of China’s great painter. He worked with wood during his early youth.Then between 1902 and 1909, he travelled across the country and painted many picures of scenery. His interest changed later simple pictures from everyday life, such as vegetables, flowers, birds, and insects. Cabbage is a well-known example of Qi’s works. The tiny insect near the cabbage has some red on it back. Its black eyes, which are fix on the cabbage, shows the creature’s interest in the vegetable. Qi Baishi’s style of paint often leaves the audience guess and makes them to use their imagine.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My favorite book is The Return of the Native by the famous English novelists Thomas Hardy. This novel was first publish in 1878. It is generally regarded his masterwork. In the novel, Thomas Hardy gives expression to his person vision of life. He points out that chances and accidents which are parts of life and he absorbs them in a theme of the novel. The story is very interesting or exciting. They may appeal especially to readers who are fond of excitements. This novel enables me to understanding life. So I like this novel better.