增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
About eighth years ago, I went to visit my grandfather during the summer holiday, who lived in a small village. One Saturday afternoon, my grandfather asked me climb a nearby mountain with him. At first, I ran fast, leaving my grandfather behind. However, about twenty minute later, I felt so tired that I stopped run and eventually chose to sit down for a rest. Soon, my grandfather reached when I was. He looked for me and asked, “Have I noticed the beautiful flowers along the way?" I kept silently. My grandfather smiled, "My dear, you are not in a race and on a journey.” After that, my grandfather and I had walked slowly, appreciating the scenery and laughing along the way.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother has been living in the countryside since she was an child. Nowadays, she works hardly to grow vegetables with my father but goes to the market to sell them. My mother has a hobby-singing. She has a sweetest voice. She usually sings while sell vegetables in the market, what attracts many customers. Hearing her to sing, many people come to buy vegetables. My whole family supports her. And last month, my mother took part a TV singing contest and won a prize. That has made more people knowing her. Now my mother is a famous farmer’s singer in our neighborhood.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The person that we should learn needn’t be rich or famous. It can be a person we live with. For I, it’s my father. I still remembered the days when I was a child. Although he had plenty of works to do, he still stayed with me but played games with me. With time gone by, I’m in Senior 3 now. It is I who has no time to stay with him now! However, he is still behind me and tries his best to make it a better life for our family. What selfless he is! I am very gratefully to him. He is not only my father, but also a hero living with me!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Disappointed at the result of the examination, I sat in the sofa in silent after school. My father found I was so unhappy but came to ask me why. After learning the reason, my father give me a smile. He said, “Don’t allow the terribly things in your life to discount the positive one. Don’t let a bad day or month or year to make you feel like you have a bad life. Instead focusing on everything that’s going wrong, start holding onto all of the things that is going right. You’ll feel better soon.” Hear what my father said, I felt it the shame to act like that and decided to cheer myself up.
