增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Linda Evans was my neighbor and best friend. When I was 13, my family moves away. Then we lost in touch. Over the years, I missed Linda very much. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda should fill.
One day I was reading a newspaper while I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda. So I decided to wrote to her. She called as soon as she got letter. She said excited, "The woman in the photo is my mother." Minutes late I heard a voice that I knew very well, even after 40 years. We laughed and cried and talking about each other's lives. Now the empty place in my heart has filled.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week I went to the theatre. I have a very good seat. The play was very interested. I did not enjoy it. A young man and a young woman was sitting behind me. They were talked loudly. I got very angry. I could not hear the actor. I turned round. I looked at the man or the woman angrily. They did not pay any attention to. In the end, I could not bear them. I turned round again. “I can’t hear a word!” I said angry, “It’s none of your business,” the young man said rudely, “This is private conversation!”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
From the story of Anne Frank,I think that a best friend is someone to who we can tell everything,even our most person feelings and thoughts.Anne treated her diary as her the best friend.The German Nazis were in search of Anne and her family and they have to hide away from the chase.They didn’t dare go out even in the evenings.They had to stay indoors day or night.Anne missed the beauty of nature too much that she stayed up until eleven thirty one evening just to see the moonlight.She said,“This is the first time I had seen the moonlight since I was here.”Unfortunately,the family was discovered at last and take away.
增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree complete. Last Friday, I woke up very early and decide to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders bury in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shops were decorated pretty well, which attracted our eyes. The whole city was covered with green tree, making it green city. At this moment, I found the city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Lucy is a foreign student in our school. There is a pity that she is going to leave, which make us all very sad. She is a kind-hearted girl, but always offers to help us our English. I remembered when I am preparing for a speaking contest two month ago, Lucy spent her spare time teach me for almost three days. I won the first prize in the contest. When I said thanks to her, and she gave me a big smile. I hope that he can come to China again. I wish her a colorfully and interesting life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend calls Tony. He is our monitor and he as well as some other classmates in our class is outstanding. Though he is a cleverer boy, he works very hard. Have much in common, we have a lot to talk about. One evening he told me what something happening when his parents were out. He was doing his homework one Sunday morning while he smelt something burning. He stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of his neighbour’s house. He called 119 immediately. Ten minutes late, the firemen came and put off the fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for his help.
【推荐3】Alice, my closest friend, devotes many energy to her lessons all day long. She is always one of the top student in our class. She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy some pop songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons. As an enthusiastic volunteer she has successful organized varieties of voluntary activities. We paid visit to nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed by the staff in the home. Win honour for our school. Alice is admired by our classmates.