增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
People always say that we lack of the awareness of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square which many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders absorb in feeding birds. Without many cars produce smog on the street, I realized that the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops, which used to be old but shabby, were decorated pretty well and they caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making comfortable to walk in the city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!
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删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember my first dancing lesson when I was eight year old. Early in the morning, my mother and I go to the dancing school where was an hour's ride from our home. When we arrived, we saw a teacher or some pupils performing a kind of Chinese folk dance. They were in beautifully dresses and the music was lovely. They were dancing such beautifully that we fell in love with dancing then and there. 1 deeply impressed with the colorful clothes and the dancers’ perform. As a result of, I started to learn to dance with Miss Li, and learned a lot of from her.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On a freezing snowy day, I have to eat out. As soon as I got outside, I felt cold wind blown snow into my face.
All of a sudden repeated short noises reached my ears in wind. Wondering where it came from, I followed the noises, taking care of each of my step in order not to slip. An old man with grey hair came into sight, but there were piles of snow on his two sides. He was clearing the road off snow in the biting cold. He was neither tall nor strong, but I felt nothing was taller as this old man.
He could have stayed in his warm home comfortable, tasting tea while watching a TV programme. What he did has not only shortened the hours we spent on the road but also narrowed the distance between people.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yao is one of my best freinds who I grew up with from the age of 2. However, she moved to Italy 9 year ago because of her parents’work. Last year I came back to our home town spend the summer vacation. Missed her so much , I immediately went to an airport to pick her up when I heard about her return. Upon meeting, we tightly hugged with each other. Then we started to talk about the past joy moments we shared together. She brought me a little memorial sculpture of a cartoon character or the newly updated series of the novels that we are crazy about before as gifts. What kind and considerate she was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for ask me about Qianmen Street. I’m glad tell you something about it. Qianmen Street, that is more than 800 meters long and has a history of over 600 years, is a famous street. There are about 300 shops along both side of it. So it is easy for you to buy which you need. Since it lies just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, the transportation is very conveniently. Not only Buses No. 17 and 59 but also Subway Line 2 carry you there. Qianmen Street was well-known as a walking street, so you can also take horse-drawn cars to teahouses or theatres where you can learn much about Chinese culture and lifestyle. I believe you can have a fun here.
Welcome to Beijing!
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing to express my concern about the sports facilities in campus. I have noticed that our school has very limited resources in term of students’ opportunities to do sports.
It is known to all what sports are very important to young people. If they have an access to good sports facilities, young people can adopt a healthy lifestyle and become more confident.
I suggest build a new playground, where should be designed for students with different interests. They should have a different section for each activity and available to students all year round. I believe so a sports area will meet our sporting needs.
Thanks for your reading.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Ajay,
Thank you so much for your kind invitation to exhibition, "Ancient India", which was now on at the local museum. I'd love to join in you.
I'd be particular happy to watch this exhibition because the brilliant Indian culture has always been mysterious but attractive to me. India is an old civilization just like China. It will be excited to see all the exhibits that have traveled so a long way to China! With me as a companion, it's a chance to have a good understanding of Indian people's life. Let's meeting at the entrance to the museum at 9:30 am on Thursday, July 23.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
