增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I go to a park. The moment I got here, I was attracted by the environment. It was the first time when I had come to the park. It is a good place of people to relax. I walked in the park that there were beautiful plants, especially some beautiful flowers. To my surprise, I met one of my classmate. We did some exercise and talked about some interested things. Before returning back home, we promised to come to a park every weekend.
In the times of high buildings, parks are important for modern people breathe fresh air.
相似题推荐
On my way to the bookstore, I noticed a group of people were surrounded two anxious foreigners. I stopped and found that they were tourist from Canada who careless left a very important wallet in a taxi. Then I accompanied them to the nearest police station and without the police’s help, we got in touch with the taxi company. We told that a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman drives us to the company without delay. The two Canadians happily claimed their wallet, that contained their passports, flight tickets, some cash or credit cards. At last, they expressed our thanks to me. I feel it is really a great pleasure to help the others.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was cold and rainy in yesterday. Standing at a bus stop on Jiner Road, I notice that an old man didn’t have a hat and an umbrella. Without delay, I went up and gave her the umbrella I carried with me. As the result, I was caught in the heavy rain. Unfortunately, I was entirely wet when I got to school. To my great happy, my head-teacher and classmates thought high of me the moment they knew about my kind act. It was not until then when I realized giving was joyful than I had thought. I will try my best to help those which are in need in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Peter joined in the army. He did quite well in everything besides shooting. One day the new soldiers were practiced shooting, and all of them were doing quite well except Peter. After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit it one, the officer shouted him, “You’re quite hopeless. Don’t waste your last bullet! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!” Peter went behind the wall, and a few seconds late the sound of a shot was heard by the officer and the other soldier. “Heavens!” the officer said. “Has that silly man real done so?” He ran behind the wall anxiously, and Peter was all right. “I’m sorry,” Peter said, “but I miss again.”
