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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.85 引用次数:83 题号:12346474
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A cosmetic company's quirky(古怪的) video advert has backfired with customer saying they will refuse to buy its products.

Purcotton, the Chinese company owned by Winner Medical Co., released the video on Douyin, the Chinese version of TikTok. The video starts with a woman walking along and being followed by a man who face is covered. Looking concerned, the woman produces a Purcotton wet wipe and removes his makeup. When the man taps her shoulder, she turns out and a man's face is shown.

"What’s up, brother?” asks the woman, in a manly voice. Vomiting sounds and visual effects have been added.

More than 3,000 commented, mainly offended by how acceptable the video is, stated it’s appalling that they should normalize stalking(骚扰). A female Weibo user said it was really not funny that a woman’s looks were being made fun.

China Women’s News condemned Purcotton and comment that the video was full of bias, gender stereotypes and ignorance.

Purcotton has withdrawn the video and apologized for the discomfort caused to women, saying future advertising content will be strict examined.

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