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As one of the most important traditional festival in China, the Mid-Autumn Festival dated back to over 1,000 years ago. General speaking, people regard it a celebration of their hard work and harvest.
On Mid-Autumn Day, all family member spare no effort to go back home to have a dinner together wherever they are. After dinner, they appreciate the beautiful full moon while eat moon cakes, the traditional food for the festival, that is round in shape and means family reunion. Both of the moon, the moon cakes and the relaxed atmosphere combine to create a feeling of happiness in everyone’s heart.
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Doctors tell us that holidays are not necessary. We should rest from work a week and two each year. They say we should leave our homes and goes to another part of the country. We should go away for holiday. Then after the holiday, we return home fresh but strong and ready to another year of hard work. This seems to make sense. But is it true? No exactly. Some people do not like to stay in strange hotel or strange houses. It is especially true for young children. They don’t like sudden changes in their lives. They like their homes better of all.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday, which I am looking forward to, are coming. What a fun it is to have sports! Ski is one of my interest. I can also ride my bicycle, climb high mountains and go skating. Beside, I can play chess with my grandfather. How interesting my holiday would be! And my father is always afraid I will hurt by truck, fall into water or fall off a tree. He is afraid I will fight against others or be taken away by worse men. But if I am friendly and carefully enough, how will these things happen? I must try my best persuade my father.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But at the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are clean and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind blow on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I’m surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Chinese brush calligraphy is one of the most important art form in China.
It origin is unknown, but local tales say it goes back over 4000 years to the time of Yellow Emperor, when characters carved on animal bones or tortoise shells. Then Qin Shi Huang united China and set regular rules for Chinese characters, making it easier for people to learn. Later cursive script (草书) appeared. It is written freely, but it’s not easy to be read.
Today it’s once again the subject in schools and an art form high appreciated across the world. Anyone can practise it and that is required is a simple set including a brush, ink, or paper. Practise this art consistently can develop personal character and is of great beneficial to health.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I’m glad to hear from you, known that you’re curious about Tomb-Sweeping Day. In fact, Tomb-Sweeping Day is to be in honor of the dead, that is similar to the day of the dead in the west. It will fall in April 5th this year.
During this festival, Chinese people visit their family graves to remove the wild plants but sweep away the dirt. In addition, people are also set out offerings of food and spirit money, which becomes a way to honor past ancestors. However, it’s a time for the whole family get together, enjoying some tasty food and sharing happiness and sorrow.
To conclude, it is in this way that we cherish the memory of our ancestor and show respect to us. I would appreciate it very much if you could come to observe the festival in personal.