增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(第11处起)不计分。
One of my hobbies is running. I really like running so first of all it's very cheap. It doesn't cost you any money. You can do it anywhere, as example, on a city street. If you run a lot, maybe three or four times a week, you will definite stay in shape. When you run, it's very important drink lots of waters. You should drink a lot of the water before you run and then maybe you should drink a little when you run, if you ran for more than 30 minutes. Naturally, stretch is very important. Most people actually stretch before you run, and I like to stretch after I run .
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I would like to talk about my favorite sport, running. I only take it up a few months ago thanks to my colleagues whom are professional runners. I spend more than two hours run every afternoon. There are several reasons why I am fond this sport. First, it is the pretty cheap and easy sport to try. All I need is a pair of running shoes. Second, this is a sport that can bring us some new friends. Third, since I started this sport I have hardly caught any more common health issue like fever, flu, or cold. What’s more, I can show higher productivity than before and work for longer hours without feeling tiring. All in all, I recommend that everyone tries this sport.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Life without a hobby is like food without salt. I have much hobbies like drawing, gardening and reading, among what my favorite is gardening.
I enjoy tending my plants but watering them every day, which gives me sense of achievement and satisfaction. Additionally, the beauty of flowers makes me relaxing. My hobby is really helpful for my study, especial when I’m tired after doing my schoolworks. It is a great relief for me to seeing beautiful flowers and lovely plants. Doing that can give you a good chance to breathe and think of freely.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A friend gave out me a flowerbed. At first, I didn’t understand why she were so crazy about plant flowers in such a tiny pot. Now I do.
After having it for a few month and joining some groups who did the same thing, I just fell in love with my newly find hobby. Then, I started ordering more species and all the necessity supplies to create my own flowerbeds. I even got a few friends into it, which was a nicely experience.
I really love taking care of little creatures and watching them grow up. The hobby has brought me so many fun and it’s very easy! The flowers mostly take care of them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
) 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I want to talk about exercise between classes specially designing for primary and middle school students. Exercise between classes are an important part of our school life and contains basic movement pattern like jumping and running. Usually we do it in the morning in music. I think it is necessarily and lovely to do it. First, with the famous saying goes, “Life lies in exercise.” To keep physically fit, we must involve us in regular sports practice. What’s more, not only exercise make us feel relaxed but it also makes a difference to our moods. Besides, by taking exercise, and we will learn very more about teamwork and self-control.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,
I learn that some people laugh at me for being overweight. Don’t be so worried about your figure.
I know a group calling HOOP from the Internet, which is established to be the voice of the overweight persons. It made up of a group of friendly and supportive people, all understanding the struggle of being overweight. So you will not feel lonely when you exercise. There are a plenty of activities and trainer who don’t push you to do what you dislike. With their support and encourage it’s easy for you to leave your comfort zone and try something new.
I would high recommend HOOP to you. Whether it’s to complete a personal challenge and start a healthier lifestyle, HOOP can really help you become the best version of you. Although you keep exercising, your figure will be good than before. Best wishes!
Yours,
Vivian
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I started school, I am weak and often caught a cold. I often asked for leave because of illness, which influenced my studies. So I decided to change so a bad situation. Since junior high school, I have made running a form of exercise build up my body. The long-distance running has not only made me health, but improved your running skills.
When I entered on high school, I was choosing as a school athlete. I took part in a number of sports competition when I was free but got good results. Running has changed my life. The decision that I should go running whenever I have time have brought me a lot.
