增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m writing to tell you our plan to visit Mount Huangshan. I’d be very happy to accompany you to go here. Mount Huangshan, locating in southern Anhui Province, famous for its fantastic scenery. Mount Huangshan has more famous scenic attractions than many another mountains in China. It is wide known for the beautifully-shaped pine tree, clouds and rocks. The hot springs, that come out from deep underground, are suitable to bathe in and even to drink. As it was often cloudy and rainy on the mountain, it would be better to bring a raincoat and wear the suitable pair of shoes. Let’s meet at 7:40 at the school gate on this Saturday morning. Looking forward to seeing you.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Here come the summer holiday. I'm pleasing to make a plan for the coming days. Since I am a third -year senior high school student this term, many of my time is spent on study. I try to finish all the homework which is required by my teachers. I'd like to have a trip with my friends to visit several scenic spot and appreciate the beauty of nature. The trip can broaden our horizons and relax them after the tough exam. In the addition, I will do sports as usual such as playing table tennis, which is beneficial from my health. I convinced I'll have a meaning holiday.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On graduation approaching, I can’t help consider my college major. As a science student, I show great interests in physics, so chances are that I will take physics as my major.
As far as I am concerned, physics plays essential part in the development of our country. Moreover, by majoring in physics, I cannot only satisfy my person interest but also contributed to the scientific and technical progress of China. Meanwhile, physics will be help me have a deeper understanding of what the world works, fostering my creativity and critical thinking ability.
Above all, to get fully prepared for my cream major, I must learn a lot of basically knowledge. Furthermore, I’ll try various ways to broad my view in physics and concentrate all my efforts on China’s development.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am an actor, who likes being independently, living on my own. I enjoy going to parties and meet people. Which is quite funny is that they can't remember the names of any of my films when I meet some people for the first time but they recognize myself. They get embarrassed, so I don't mind. The last one was quite a few year ago after all. I lived here in New York for nearly thirty years, but I feel I need for a change. So maybe next year I would do something excited like traveling around the world.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mum and Dad
We're having a wonderful time in Australia. There is so much to see that it is impossible for me to tell you everything. During past three days, we've travelled a lot around Sydney. We went to the zoo, on where we saw many animals that can only be found in Australia. We spent some time relaxing in the sunshine at the beach, but we went to Pitt Street and wander around for a bit while we did some shopping. Though I would like to spend more time here, the locally guide told us that we will fly to Cairns tomorrow. It's said that word cannot describe the beauty of the ocean near Cairns. Now everybody is busy packed so that we will not lose time when we set off. This time tomorrow we will be enjoying the ocean near Cairns. I can't wait!
Because I have much more to tell you, I must go to bed now so that I can get up early and get to the airport on time. Please send my best wishes to Granny and tell she that I am coming back soon.
Love
Robert
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）花掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday, my family took a train trip to Guangzhou. The train was crowd and slow, but the scenery were just great! On the day we arrive, we visited several famous buildings. After that we had lunch in an Indian restaurant, which they didn’t use plates! We served the food on fresh leaves, and we ate with our hands. In the afternoon, we went for walk in the gardens with a great many of trees and flowers I’d never seen. Then, we did some shoppings in the town centre. It wasn’t that cheap, so there were a variety of nice things there. How a fantastic day!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。（满分10分）
I couldn't be happy to hear your intention to come to China for vacation, during which time you will able to have a taste of our unique "Red Culture".
Actually, here in my hometown exists some ideal spots that suit your need. Jinzhai County, situated in the west of Anhui province, which is well known to a continuous stream of travelers as its scenic view as well as historical significance. With breathtaking scenery or rich "Red Culture'* resources, it is certainly my top choice. You can visit a couple of local museum, which will help you have a good knowledge of the revolutionary history.
I am sure it will be the wonderful experience and I can't wait to exploring its charm with you.
