增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone!
I'd like to share a quote with you, which go like this: “Time is said to be money, but it is more — it is life.” It is true that time is great value. After all, anything is more precious than time. In our daily life, we've often been told that lose time will never return. To be honest, I am used to spend plenty of time playing computer games, what made me fall far behind my classmates. Have realized how much time I wasted, I've made up my minds to work hard to catch up with them. Wasting time is just like wasting part of our lives. Time is such valuable that if you want your dreams to come true, you should make the more of it.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I like singing, but I’m not brave enough to sing in public. Last term I go to the birthday of my cousin. She invited me to sing him a song, but I refused. I was worried I would laughed at by her friends. However, see her a bit down, I decided to give it the try. Everything was difficulty at the start. My face felt hot, but my voice sounded low. Strange, after a little while I was not afraid of anymore. Once I finished they cheered. I finally realized that we could make progresses only by setting aside our fears.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During my second month of nursing school, our professors gave us a quiz. I had smoothly finished the others’ questions when I got stuck on the last one: “What’s the first name of the woman who clean the school?” I had seen, many times, the woman, tall and in her fifty, but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper, leave the last question blankly. After a class ended, one student asked for the answer for the question. The professor said, “As you know, that in your careers you will meet many people. You should respect them and care about them, even you just smile and say ‘hello’ to them.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the summer vacation of my first year in high school, I just stay at home all day long, lying in bed and listening to music. Even my father got tiring of seeing me lying in my rooms. One day, I thought I couldn’t live in this way any longer, but I asked my father if he could buy us a basketball and he said yes. He told me that if I really wanted play, I would need to show him. Every time he saw me playing the basketball with my friends, he smiled. Gradual, I became so active that I could concentrate much on my studies than before. Physical activities does help build our character.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Patricia Pania never wanted to be a public figure. All she wanted to be is a mother and homemaker. But her life was turned upside down when a motorist, was attracted by his cell phone, ran a stop sign and crashed in the side of her car. The impact (撞击) killed her 2-year-old daughter. Four month later, Pania unwillingly and bravely decided to try to educate the public and to fight for laws to ban drivers using cell phones while a car is moving. In her speech she wanted to save another children from that happened to her daughter. Many in the audience were moved to tears, and to action. Pania gained reputation as a high affective speaker. Her appearance on a talk show was broadcast three times, send her message to over 14 million people. Her campaign increased public awareness of the problem, and caused over 300 cities and several states to consider restrictions (限制) on cell phone use.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I work hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term exam, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for suggestions when I got to home. Hear what I told him, he said, “Exam results are sometime unexpected. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advices. Now I realize that the process of learning is more important and my English is good than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinions from old people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The forest of my hometown is beautiful no matter how the season is. I was driving slowly in this morning when I saw a deer live in the woods appear in the middle of the road. I came to the full stop, and we stared at each other. He seemed cleverly. He had been in this world for some month and I didn't want end his life. Finally, I motioned with my hand for him to go on. Having seen anything to fear, he jumped across the road. I drive on smiling at the magic of this moment but was thankful that I had been going slowly not to hit this beautiful creature.
