增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They often thought wrong for me to do some things without their permission and always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( /\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This happened when I was in junior high school. Once, my parents went see my grandparents, and I was alone at home. I went to bed early than usual. I suddenly woke up at two on the morning. I heard a noise. I got out of bed and went slowly downstairs. I was sure that two men was speaking very quietly in the living room. “Thief!” I thought. Running back upstairs, I immediate called the police. I was really frightening. Fortunately, the police arrived quickly. After open the front door, and they went into the living room. Then they came upstairs to find me. “Don’t worry, ” they explain. “We’ve turned the TV off for you!”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you thought about traveling to China? Plan a trip to China with family takes on a different meaning. It can be such an eye opener which you will get a new picture of China.
Our trip with my family to China started last year. We were impressed by the rich culture and beautiful scenery. Apart from that, we were all witnessed the impressed changes of this land. We ride one of the fastest trains in the world and it took only 5 minutes to get the airport in Shanghai. Most interesting, we paid by mobile phones and were amazed at the huge conveniences brought by this “new” technology. It was the unique experience we’d never forget.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How will words influence others? Let me tell you one of my experience. Parents are always so much nervous about their children’s study that they do almost everything to them. I’m just one of these children. Even at age of 15, I failed to doing things well. I began to doubt my ability and felt very sadly. Then one day my deskmate said to me, “Always trusting yourself and you can surely do things well.” Encouraged by what he said, I tried to do everything by himself and I found that I can do things well.
Encouraged words can really help people a lot.
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went hiking to a mountain with my friend last summer. It was a good trip in the beginning and something unexpected happened halfway. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far. Nobody knew how to deal it. One girl tried to call her mum over her mobile phone, but there is no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him to rest in it. After taken some pills, he drank some water and ate some food. After a while, I felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed ourselves on a top of the mountain.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to theatre, they left their German dog to guard his home. When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and he quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing, but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth over $10, 000 from a safe, the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep. When the police arrived at twenty minutes later, the burglars had gone. The dog was proudly guarded the empty safe. When the first policeman entered into the room, it immediately attacked him, tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.