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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.65 引用次数:38 题号:15831767
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

There are many respectable people around us. As for me, my father is the one I respect him. He is a doctor and always takes a positively attitude towards life.

There are various reasons that I admire him. As a doctor, he is devoted to his job, saying “Nothing is more important than saving a life, whenever difficult it is.” Two years ago, he volunteered to go to Wuhan, determining to help those suffering from COVID-19, despite the risk of being infected, which made me promote the understanding of brave and responsibility. As a father, not only does he care about my life, also inspires me to set the high aim and strive for it. Without his encouragement, I couldn’t have made so much progresses.

Such is my father, a great man who set a good example for me and I love him a great deal.

【知识点】 家人和亲人

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