【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加, 删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词效模画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

About eight years ago, I go to visit my grandfather during the summer holiday, who lived in a small village. One Saturday afternoon, my grandfather asked me climb a nearby mountain with him. At first, I ran fast, leaving my grandfather behind. However, about twenty minute later, I felt so tired that I stopped run and eventually chose to sit down for the rest. Soon, my grandfather reached when I was. He looked at me and asked, "Have I noticed the beautiful flowers along the way?" I kept silently. My grandfather smiled, "My dear, you are not in a race and on a journey." After that, my grandfather and I had walked slowly, appreciating the scenery and laughing along the way.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My grandparents invited us to their house in the countryside to help harvest peanuts on last Saturday. They jumped at the invitation. The next day, my parents and I had hardly reached the destination while we were greeted by a green peanut field. I was so exciting that I rolled up my sleeves immediate and set about digging peanuts. In the beginning, I were enthusiastic and energetic. Therefore, after a while, my lands began to ache and I was bathed in sweat. Noticed my situation, Grandma reminded me to take break before starting again. Only then do I learn an important life lesson: harvest and comfort can not coexist.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.从第六处起不计分

I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play, that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encouraged me to do so. Now I have changed great. I am always brave enough to overcome the difficulty in my heart. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face and only in this way can we make progresses.

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单 词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Which would you prefer to live, in the city or the countryside? While many people choose the former, I think for children, live in the countryside is a better choice. Country areas were less polluted. Children exposing to these environments are much healthier than those in cities. With fresh air breathe, children in the countryside are generally healthier and happier. We can acquire a lot of living skills, such as what to make a fire, cook and so on. They can also run freely in the fields, climb trees, catch the fish and do many other interesting things.
Of course, we can't absolute deny that living in the city has its advantages. But in my view, the countryside is more appropriate of children to grow up.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Nathan,

I'm Li Hua, president of English Club in Hongshui High School. Know that you are leaving for Britain, I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for that you did as our foreign teacher.

Honestly speaking, some activities hold by our club would not have being so successful without your help. When we were preparing for the English Drama Competition, you offered plenty of advices about students’ English pronunciations as well as how to perform in a impressive way, which greatly improved their confidence on the stage. However, inspired by you, we organized several English Movie Nights when students could watch English movies with you and discuss in English afterwards. Not only they practice their spoken English, but also they had a better understanding of foreign cultures.

Now, face with your leaving, I hope you will have a great life back in your hometown. We will miss you a lot of. Take care!

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【推荐3】短文改错

Some days ago there was a theft in our house that we lost some precious item. A few days later I speak to my neighbor, an elderly retired man, about the need for security guards in our community so that such the incident wouldn't happen in another houses. To my surprise, his advice was "You protect your own house and let others to defend their own. " I was terrible disappointed at his response. Until today, I am frustrated to see many people feel that mind their own business is the top rule. But please remember we are living a shared society. Unit we stand, divided we fall.