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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Zhang Jie, a 45-year-old volunteer, had picked up rubbish on the Great Wall since 2014. It is his eight year protecting the historic wall. For Zhang, born and was raised in a village near the Great Wall, the Wall is not just a treasure left by the ancestors, and a childhood paradise (乐园). However, with more tourists coming, more rubbish needs collected. Sometimes, rubbish bags are piled up to one meter higher. Zhang came up with an idea and formed a group 20 volunteers. Zhang’s story has inspired million of Weibo users, many of who express their appreciation to him. Today, Zhang is still protecting the Great Wall in her own way.

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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