增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My cousin travelled to Paris for a little vacation. I wanted give him a small gift so he could have a good time there. I buy him a ticket to attend the Orchestre de Paris. He’s considered the young adult so I was able to buy him a ticket at a reducing price in a very good location. Since he was travelling with his friend, I bought his friend a ticket as well as so they can enjoy the concert together. He told me that the Philmarmonie de Paris was excited and the concert was a highlight of our trip. I really like this cousin, he’s an excellent guy and since I am not considerable able to attend so nice concerts because of travel, I wanted him to enjoy it. It’s like me be there.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We both waited for a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eager to see the fierce animals that I quickened my step through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Bad still, I had no money with me, which meant I had to walk home. How an awful experience!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处定)不计分。
Fathers are busily people, but taking some time off for children's activities will create sweet memories for both fathers or children, For example, I will never forget my first sports day spend with my father. I was seven and his school was going to hold a sports day on Saturday morning. My father worked six day a week, including Saturday. Therefore, he tells me that he couldn't go to see me to run because his students would be unhappy if he took the morning off. I was very disappointing and cried. To my surprising, my father showed up on the sports day and we had great time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandpa likes Peking Opera. In the past, I often saw him watching lots of such program on TV. However, since last year, he had begun to learn to sing Peking Opera on the phone. When he got a smartphone send by my father, I got the idea for teaching him how to use it. I instructed her to turn on the phone and watched the videos of Peking Opera. At the first, he could not follow me, but he listened with great careful. I taught him patiently and he learned use it at last. Now not only can he enjoy the videos, and he can sing Peking Opera well.
