增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to learn more about Chinese history and raise their cultural awareness, we were organized to have a trip to our local history museum on last Sunday.
Locating in the southern part of our city, the museum is one of most frequently visited attractions for its various ancient exhibits. We see items from different times, that showed us the history behind. Beside, we not only heard a lot of interesting stories and learned about the lifestyle of ancient people.
Surrounded by these historic object, we were proud of our nation’s civilization achievements. This was an unforgettably experience.
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To show our love for poor kids whom were living in earthquake-hit areas, our school holds a special activity the other day in our school lecture hall. Its purpose was to making sure those poor kids have a warm winter. All the teachers and students in our school took an actively part in this activity. We gave away 400 pieces of clothes and 200 pairs of shoe altogether. After being sorted, they will be send to those in the need. I believe what they did will make a great difference to those poor kids. Although we all learn to care for others, the world will be more comfortable to live.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday we students in the five grade were organized to offer service at the railway station. We were dividing into small groups to finish different tasks. Upon their arrival in the early morning, we soon got down to help the others. Some picked up rubbish on the ground and provides information for passengers. Some helped the passengers with heavy luggages. And the rest taught passengers what to use the ticket vending machine. Tired as we were, we felt happily when receiving thanks. It is believed that if by helping each other we will make the society better place.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.每一句最多两处错误；3.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Chris,
I’m happy to hear of you. You had asked me in your last email about the student clubs in my school and the following information may give you an general idea.
Consisting of more than five thousands students, my school provides various clubs meet all tastes. Students can choose a club to join or set up a new one with the help of your teachers. The speech, photography, painting, and basketball clubs enjoys the greatest popularity. As for me, I’m a regularly member of the volleyball club, that I’ve learned the value of teamwork and a healthy way to face challenges in my life.
I hope the information providing is helpful.
Yours
Li Hua
