增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two year ago, my best friend Lily moved another town because her parents had found their new jobs there. The day she left, we couldn’t help cry loudly. I thought I would never see her again unless we were admitted to a same university. To my delighted, she appeared at my 18th birthday party last weekend, with a broad smile on his face. I was so happy that I hug her tightly. That day we talked about a lot. She said it was in her new school which she had made some closely friends. Later, we promised to visit each other at least once a year.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Ming is a friend of mine, whom is in Senior One in No. 1 middle school. Now I’d love to introducing him in detail. I’m sure of that he will leave a deep impression on you. First, Li Ming is an outstanding boy that likes making friends. Beside, not only does he do well in his studies but he is also good at sports. You can find her either concentrating on his study in the library nor taking exercise on the playground. However, what have impressed me most is his unconditionally love for the old. Last summer vacation, he takes care of the old in a nursing home as volunteer.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, I spent one memorable afternoon with my little friend Tom, which was the child of my neighbors next door. When I reached home after school, I find Tom sitting on the stairs.
Know he had lost his key, and I invited him to my home. He started to do his homework. Meanwhile, I called her mother and told her what had happened. Soon Tom finished all his homework. Since it was still early, I decided play Chinese chess with him so that he wouldn't feel boring. Tom was very careful and he thought very hard before makes any move. Later, Tom's mother arrived and thanked me for taking care of her sons. Tom said he had an enjoyable afternoon. In fact, I also felt very happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school offers many a kinds of hobby classes. We take it in our free periods or after school. Last year，I took a freely Wednesday evening piano class，which I made friends with Li Hua. We chanced to live in the same residential community，but after class，we often walked home together. Little by little，we found that we shared a lot in common, though we were in different grade. Since then we had been very good friends. This summer Li Hua will finish high school and taking her College Entrance Examination. I wish her better luck，and also that we could keep close touch with each other and be good friends forever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone have his or her own friends. A friend is a necessary role in one's growth.
I have an honest friend name Li Xin. She is a warm-hearted girl. Although I was three years older than her, we can talk about everything. Most of the time, people say we are like sister when we are together. In my one opinion, friends are those which encourage us when we are sick. They are along with us when we are crazily. They help us when we are on trouble.
Li Xin is like mine full sister. I suppose that friendship is one of the greatest relationships in world.
Dear Lucy,
Sorry to know that you are now having trouble communicate with others, and you often feel lonely. That’s probable because you are new here and your classmates don’t know much about you. But I think you can get on well with them unless you follow the advices below.
Firstly, you should be friendly to our classmates. Secondly, it’s important to learn to listening to others. Take active part in their discussions, get to know their likes and dislikes and expressing your own positive ideas. Also, don’t leave your classmates when they are in trouble because of a friend in need is a friend indeed.
With time going by, your classmates would know you better and like to be friends with you.
Yours sincerely,
David
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a neighbor who are a hard-working nurse. One day, she asked me if I could help her to deal with a bookcase that she didn’t need anymore. I said sure and we loaded it in her car. As we were working on unloaded it at the garbage station, my next-door neighbor came over but asked if we needed help. He carried that big bookcase into the garbage station quick! I gave my nurse friend a book calling American Nightingale, a book about Frances Slanger—a WW II nurse. I know my nurse neighbor doesn’t have time cook much, so I gave some apple cookies where I just made to her. And some cookies would go to my next-door neighbor and her family. They were very pleasing. I love my neighbor.
