增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning our school is going to hold an summer camp during the vacation, I’m really interested on it. There is so many wonderful courses, including gardening, cooking, self-defense but nursing, which are all so very useful to us students.
Now, I have decided apply for the cooking course. I want to learning how to cook delicious foods. Besides, with the knowledge of cooking, I can help my parent cook supper, which will make them happily. I’d appreciate it if you could be offered a chance to join the camp.
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除:把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Next week, our school will hold a Chinese speech contest intending for foreigners. The contest, which topic is the Most Beautiful Family, will take place in our school hall. It will start at 9 am. on a morning of June 9th. We believe international students in our school had a lot to share because family matters much wherever we are from. However, we believe it can arouse student’s awareness of family.
When delivering the speech, contestants should speak clear and loudly without referring their notes. Also they should keep up in mind that they have only five minutes for it. Hope everything go smoothly. Looking forward to the arrival of that day.
添加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿),并在该符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处错误。
Our summer camp was great. There were interested activities to do all day long. One night, our teacher took us for a walk through the woods. We walked for 20 minutes when sudden we heard about some strange noises. Then, which we saw really surprised us all. Down by the lake, two rabbits are fighting over some bread. One rainy day, we chose go deep into the forest. We saw some beautiful flowering plants but took many photos of them. Our teacher knew the history and value of many of these plants. She introduced us for a plant which gave off a very special smell. She told us it could kept flies away. I certainly got a lot of knowledges about wild plants from her.
Last year, I was asked to completing a questionnaire about how to get we students to obey the school rules. First, it takes me a few hours over several weekend to write and rethink my answers. Then, I spent some more time look over what I wrote before final handing it in. I was a little excited with sending in my answers because that I thought I did a good job and hoped my school would use some of my answers. At same time, I was a little nervous. I talked about things I had experienced. To be honesty, I was unwilling to share my personal things with people.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
It is ten years that I began to show interest in collecting stamps. Now my collection of stamp covers almost every category, Chinese zodiacs, place of interest and historical people and events including. Believe it or not, from these small stamps I have learned much about which I can't get from textbooks. Meanwhile, I have made friends with those with same hobby, with whom I constant share my opinions and feelings so long as I've got a value new stamp.
Collecting stamps is a fun and of course has greatly changed my life, bringing many advantages to my study so well as to my life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Music plays a important role in my life and listen to music is my favorite activity. Usually I preferred to express my feeling through music, and I like pop music best. I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily. When I am tired after studying or when I am nervous before exams, music helps me feel relaxing and fresh. I am not good at singing or I can play the piano and the violin. In addition, I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better. Music makes your life more colorful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
May I have your attention, please?
I’m glad to talk with ray plan for the last month before the college entrance examination.
First of all, as senior student of high school, studying is our most important task. I will focus on how to improve the efficiency of my study and how to improve my different skill, especially the ability to solving problems. Secondly, I should reasonable arrange my daily life. I’m going to get up at about six in every morning and go to bed at half past ten at night and have a break at noon for an hour so that I had enough energy for my study every day. However, I will have sports for at least an hour to build up my body. Then, I will watch TV or listen to music for a short time, that can relieve my stress from hard work every day.
I hope my schedule can help you perform well in the coming college entrance examination.
Thank you!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To enrich our school life, every year we held an activity, appeals to new members to join a variety of student societies. For a long time I have been longing to organize several English club and throw English parties if possibly. Where I should do is put up attractive posters. I've heard Tom is expert at designing, but I'd like him to do me the favor to help create poster. I am wondering whether you can spare me a few minutes. If he agrees, so I will come to his house at the time most convenient to him. I'd be grateful if he'd like to offers me a helping hand.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10处,多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
I have worked from ages 17 to now(I am 60 this year), and I’ve really enjoy my career in IT. One week after leave school, I started to work. Now I do feel that my work has shaped myself in many ways.
At some point soon, I will retire— and I am terrifying! I have no idea that I will do with all that time or why I will do it. I am happy married and have a 21-year-old son. My wife and I can travel and I can read book. There are operas to enjoy it and restaurants to try, but this isn’t going to get me out bed at a reasonable time!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know from your last letter that you have a strong desire to buy some specially gifts with typical Chinese features. I’m extremely delighted to offer you some constructive advices. Here are some details.
Initially, a tea pot producing by Wuxi is an extraordinary alternative. What deserved to be mentioned is that China has a profound history concerning tea culture, which could date back thousands of years ago. Beside, not only can drinking tea promote our sense of satisfaction, but also can improve ours memory.
Secondly, that calls for our special attention is the treasure of China, Panda. Thus, a toy is named Bing Dwen Dwen can be considered due to its lovely appearance.
As the matter of fact, if you can take my suggestions into consideration, I’m sure your family will love what you choose for them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am writing to draw your attention to some proper behavior among us students like littering. It makes our school dirty but unpleasant, and do harm to the image of our school.
I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clear not appropriate what students litter anywhere. I wonder if the school could to place more dustbins around and set up specific rules for such bad behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave ourselves. I believe that, with the joint effort of teachers and students, our school will become much better place in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that our school is selecting some outstanding teacher as Star Teachers, I’m writing to recommend my English teacher Mr. Yuan for you.
Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Yuan is the one which impresses me most. Now I’d like to say some details. First and foremost, there’s no doubt that he has taught English for 30 years, during which he has awarded the title of a model teacher for many times and once won a first prize in the teachers’ speech contest. Additional, it’s obvious that he can always make his lessons lively and interesting. Needless to say, he is not only our good teacher but also our good friend so he is kind to us and always ready to help us. Last but not least, as a teacher, Mr. Yuan encouraged us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions instead of giving answers.
I would be grateful it if you could accept my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua