增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandma’s birthday was around the corner and I want to make a special present for her. While I were thinking what to do, sweet memories of the time I spent with my grandma drawing and play the piano all flooded back. It struck me what I could make her an album. I turned on the computer, selected several photos carefully , but did the graphic design. Eventual, an album containing past sweetness was born. At the birthday party, I presented album to my grandma. He hugged me tightly, tears rolling from her eyes. Seeing my grandma so satifying, my parents smiled happily. With genuine love, even a small gift can mean a lot of to our loved ones.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. In the beginning, it was extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result which, I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give up while my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Since I was born, my mother has put all his heart on me. She accompanies me all the time and do everything to make me happy. I am proud that I have so a good mother. In my heart, she like a soldier. Therefore, yesterday when my mother was doing the dish, I came to help her. To my surprised, I found she had got a white hair. I never thought she would got old. I felt so sorry to let her to worry about me. At that time, I wanted to helping her to do many things and told her that I had grown up.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather will be 94 in September. He still go down to the local shops to get to some groceries. Today when my grandfather was shopping at our local supermarket, a staff kind offered to scan his items and pack it up for him. When it was time to pay, my grandfather told he was the lucky customer today. As a gesture of thank for shopping here, the shop would pay his bill. Knew the good news, my grandfather was so excited. The staff then got him the bottle of wine. Grandfather was grateful for the people which were involved in this beautiful act of kindness.
