增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意: (1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2) 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember my thirteen birthday celebration. Instead of the usually parties, my parents decided to spend the whole day with myself. They took me to a larger bookshop first, in which I spent a long time looking through books and magazines there before selecting those I wanted. Then, we went to the cinema. There were many different movies to watch. We finally choose Fantastic 4. My face lit up when I saw the comfortable seats or the huge screen as well. That was one of the most memorable birthday I had ever had. Although I didn’t have a cake or my friends celebrate it, I was pleasant to do which I wanted that day.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. It reminds me my days which I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school. It was the first time I have lived away from my home, so I found it difficult to fit in. And the training officer was strict in me. I once thought I couldn’t stick to the end. But in anyway, I made it. The trials made it easy for me to adapt to life, but the difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life. In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as the stepping stone to future success and make the best of them.
Last week, I paid a visit a newlyopened riverside park, where is located in the southeast of the city. The sky is clear and blue. I took a freely walk in the park,with a gentle wind touch my face. The flowers along the path were impressed me a lot. The beautiful scenery gave me a sense of refresh and life. Along the way, I took such many photos that my cellphone ran out of power in the end. The trip helped us recover from the busy schedule. What amazing the power of nature is! I'm looking forward to one more trip.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
翻除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许够改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I decided take a gap year and travel around the world. I worked hardly for months to save enough money on the trip. I started my trip in Paris, a capital of France. After that, I travelled down to the south of France, that is known for its lovely beaches. Then I was spent a month walking in the mountains in northern Italy. I then travelled to Rome, but stayed there for a week visiting some of the wonderful art gallery, churches and museums. From there I fly to Athens, Greece, and took a boat to a small Greek island. I had planned to meet a friend of me there and we took an apartment on a beach and had a wonderful time swimming and sunbathing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I flew back to New York from a spring break. My flight landed lately in the evening. I decided to taking an airport bus to the downtown area so that I could find a faster and cheap taxi to get home. It turned out that a bus was full of passengers but I was chatting with a few of them. I told that it was unsafe to be waiting for in the street to catch a taxi at midnight. One of the woman in the bus said that her car was parked near the station. So she offered me a ride to my home, drop me safely and did not accept a penny in return. I was so thankful for his kindness.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once, there was an old woman who liked baking cookies. She doesn't have anyone to share those cookies with, so she just gave it away to the children around her neighborhood. This went on for three year and the cookies became quite famous. The old woman became very busy, so some children went help her. Then one day, the old woman suddenly fell sick. There were no cookies but there was no money to pay for the hospital. Thankfully, some children opened a cookie store by following the old woman unique recipe and they eventual earned enough money. After the old woman recovered, she was asking to become the manager of a store and the woman gladly agreed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I was walking down the street when I spot an elderly man sitting alone in front of a tea house. I decided to do something unusually. I walked up to him and asked if I could join him, in which surprised him a lot. Late, we two sat there for the next two hour exchanging stories. The man shared some of his amazing life stories with us. When I left, he thanked me for give my time to a lonely elderly man. I then told him that I would happy to meet him for another conversation next Sunday. After I posted an incident on social media, I received many like.
