增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party in five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a baby, my parents often gave me a hug, took me to play on the vegetable garden and took many photo of me, because they cared about my safety and kept me away from any hurt. While I was growing up, they give me more and more “love”， and I thought it began to hurt me. When I was student, they often told me many rules. For example, I wasn't allowed to use me mobile phone. However, I thought I was old enough to do what I wanted to, so I often talked back to them angry. Later, my teacher has several conversations with us. Finally, we came to know that we really loved each other, but the way to get along with each other was not correct. I regretted for treating them like that. They gave me much chances to make my own decisions.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandma is old and she has to walk with a stick. For years, she had been sharing one room with me so that I can look after her or she can also take care of me. One morning, I woke up a little of late and felt surprising that she had not woken me up. I got dressed in hurry and rushed out. I asked the man sells breakfast if he saw my grandma. He told us she had bought all his pancakes and walk away. As I turned a corner, I saw she was giving the food away to some workers, what were eating the pancakes with smiles on their face.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Like most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor sisters; in another words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family；they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subjects. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat her as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes，I wonder.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have two foreign friends, Kari and Vance, which come from the USA. Now they were teaching English in a university in Nanjing. Last year they paid the visit to our school. I had never meet any foreigners before. Besides, I was eagerly to know how I was getting on my spoken English, so I went over to talk with them. All of them were surprising a school student could speak English. And they suggested to taking a photo together. Since then we have been good friends and now we write English letter to each other often.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body build up. In the meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which is helpful in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally friendly means of transport. It is convenient to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere was the most important. Don’t hesitate, and trying to take action. I really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter.
As you know, Peter enjoys riding a bike get around. However, something is wrong with his bike, so you'd better buy him the bike as a birthday present. Then you can try to find chances to hang out by bike with him, which is helpfully in rebuilding our friendship. Beside giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as seeing a movie and going shopping. Whatever you do, being sincere was the most important.
I really hope what you can make up and be good friend forever.
Best wishes!
Mike
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In our life there is many valuable experiences. As for me, cooking for my mom on her 40th birthday is unforgettable experience.
In order to surprise my mom that day, and I decided to cook a bowl of noodles with an egg. Waking up early, I begin to boil the noodles in the kitchen. It was the first time that I had fried an egg by my own. Unfortunate, the eggs always got burnt, though I tried several time. Just then my mom came in. Seeing that I had done, she was moving to tears. She tasted the food joyfully, saying it was the most wonderful birthday gift he had ever received.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Years ago, I was a volunteer teacher in a village in Cameroon, which I befriended one of my young students, Dick. He was very helpful to me and spent much evenings at my home, assisting me with chores in exchange for meal, and teaching me the ins and outs of life in the village. He never asked me for something, but I would regular buy him school supplies or clothing, as he was very poor but said he was fatherless. At one point, I left him money care for my dog while I was away on a extended trip. After I left Cameroon, I lost in touch with Dick. I feel guilty for “abandoning him”— guilt that haunted me for years.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I happen to meet some American tourists at the gate of the Summer Palace last week. I greeted them with English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college student traveling in China. Most of us were fond of Chinese medicine. They were busy taking pictures and were surprising at the changes that had taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boat but had a good time. We were exchanged our e-mail addresses so that we could write to each other in the future. They thanked me again and again. I was gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English. What wonderful experience it was!
