增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, that was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the things in the yard that were to be sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say, “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick. Convincing, Nick brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moment’s delay, my neighbor picked up the box but announced, “I’ll take them.”
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is one of my unforgettable experience in high school. When I was on Senior 2, I got a chance to study in the UK for three months as a exchange student. Impressing by the various activities in and after class, I took an active part in it. We had group discussions and play games with classmates to enjoy the cultural diversity. I developed a deeply friendship with many UK students from different backgrounds, what helped me understand the country better. Through the three months' study, not only did I get down to know the cultural differences, but I also learned how cooperate with others.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went shopping with my mother who wanted to buy for me a pair of shoe. After three hours of look and trying, we felt tiring. So we decided to find coffee shop and take a break. While waiting for the coffee, I notice a homeless man outside. I remembered a coin I found in the changing room and planned to give it to the man. But the man refused to taking it. Finally, I secret put the coin in one of his bags and left. My mother praised me later. I thought that I just did what my grandmother often told me: pass your kind on to someone else, no matter what small it is.
增加：在缺同处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的同用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had a wonderful summer holiday. Before the holiday, I have spent a lot of effort and time prepare for the College Entrance Examination. However, a good rest needed after the hard study of three years. I did many kinds of relaxed activities, such as going to the park, riding a likes, playing sports, etc. Besides, I took a boat trip along the Three Gorges Dam, that had been dreaming about for in a long time. And I read variety books about college life in our local library to get much knowledge. I also took part in some social activities active and found a part-time job so that I could learn more about society. What meaningful the holiday was!
Five years ago, my father, who was in his forty, lost Ms job. At first, he was in low spirits and often gets drunk. One day, he read a story about Ren zhengfei, which was greatly inspired him. He turned to a friend, with which help he set up a factory. In his factory waste materials were made full use to produce environmentally friendly packing bags. With these bags well receiving, his factory went smooth. Now, he has extra money because he often helps those in need. So far, he has donated as many as $10,000. How a great father I have!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I headed for the exit with the things bought in the store. The colder wind reminded me of my gloves. Besides, I could find them neither in my pockets or in the shopping bag, which made me a little nervous. I remembered had putting them into the right pocket of my coats. I decided to return to the store that I had shopped. Just at that time, I saw shop owner walking to me. In her hand was my gloves. She said I had left it on the counter. I was so glad and grateful to her kindness that I thanked her again and again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be call upon to read his or her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confidence and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a large group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.” Immediate, I raised my hand.
