【推荐1】短文改错

There was a time when Zhang Yi and I was good friends, but now we are like stranger. On his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to talk. I was the first one to say hello to her, so we became friends. Zhang Yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it. One day last month, I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend. But he told my father about it and that made me angrily. Now, I know I was wrong. I decide to say sorry for him, because I don’t want to lose so a good friend.

【推荐2】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Ginni,

How are you getting on these days?

I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots (结)for me. I make them myself with red silk thread, cloth and some other materials. They look real beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long or 4 inches wide. In China, this knots stand for friendship, love and good lucky. People can either give them as gifts friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 dollars every.

If anyone wants to know more about knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you are need further information.

Thank you !

Zhang Lin

【推荐3】英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,

I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my good friend told me that he was going to drop out of school. He said that he wants to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, but I failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I insist that I should give it a try. The process is more important than the result. Now there is only 90 days left before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I need an advice.

Carol

【推荐1】文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

We are often in plenty of situations which we have to make a apology to someone. Effective approaches to express your apologies can really help you receive forgiveness easy. For one thing, it is not important who is the first one to say sorry. As long as you want to make up for the relationship, you had better volunteer break the ice. For another, placing stress on particular words has a big impact in the meaning and strength of apologies. For example, saying “I’m sorry” can have more of an impact than “I’m sorry”. Another way of strengthening apologies is by using and stressing adverb: I’m really sorry, I’m so sorry. Besides, what you always keep eye contact with the person you apologize to him means you take his emotion into consideration. It really works when you apologize to someone face to face. Last but not least, above all the tips lie your sincere attitude.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am a student from Hangzhou Senior High School. I'm having some trouble with your classmates at the moment. I'm very shy that I'm not good at communicating for people. Although I try to talk to my classmates and play with them，but I find it hard to make friends with them. So I felt quite lonely sometimes. I really want change this situation. But I don't know how to solve the problem. As the result，I am very worrying. I will be grateful if someone can give me some advices to deal with my trouble as quick as possible.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a baby, my parents often gave me a hug, took me to play on the vegetable garden and took many photo of me, because they cared about my safety and kept me away from any hurt. While I was growing up, they give me more and more “love”， and I thought it began to hurt me. When I was student, they often told me many rules. For example, I wasn't allowed to use me mobile phone. However, I thought I was old enough to do what I wanted to, so I often talked back to them angry. Later, my teacher has several conversations with us. Finally, we came to know that we really loved each other, but the way to get along with each other was not correct. I regretted for treating them like that. They gave me much chances to make my own decisions.