注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We were just leaving the house at dinner, when the telephone rang. He was Uncle Jim, who had a bad news for us. Grandmother took a turn for the worse and was struggling breathe. I was such sad that I began to cry. I didn’t want Grandmother to die because I loved her. We forgot about our hungers and left at once to see Grandmother. She had become thin and weak. Her eyes were opened, but she could not recognize us. I sang a song, “A Little White Boat”, which Grandmother had taught me whenever I was small. Slow, her lips moving, and then she called my name.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now. he has been living the busy and active life, going online, writing articles for newspapers, but attending academic conferences all over the country. He also had many hobbies, such as growing flowers at home, collecting stamps and coins, and especial drinking tea. There are various tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home, most of that I can’t name.
My grandpa is so very crazy about tea that he can’t live with enjoying tea several times a day. He once told me he would be sleepy without tea. I often help making tea and drink together with me. I love my grandpa.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My cousin is knowledgeable, because he can always give advices and help me make the best decision. Having graduated college, he landed a job in a company, but soon he felt boring to sit in the office all the day. My grandfather suggested he thought carefully what he really wanted. Therefore, my cousin quit to travel across China, hope to find the answer during the trip. When he arrived at a mountainous village, and he was shocked to find there was a urgent need for teachers. How he saw in local children’s eyes－eagerness to acquire knowledge－moved them, so he decided to settle down and teach them. Now, he had students all over the country.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For years, I thought my father was strongest person I had ever met. He worked hard most of his life and he was physical healthy. However, he had a seriously illness at the age of forty. My mother is always fighting alongside him. She suffered a lot of pressure as for his caretaker. She also managed to doing a full-time job and raise three children. My mother never lost faith that my father would be standing next to him again and the pair would be gardened together in the spring. It was her strength what kept my father alive. Fortunately, after 8 year of treatment, my father finally recovered.
