增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
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Some people think a hero must be a person who had made great contributions to the country or the world. However, in my heart, who is helpful and brave in daily life is a hero, but my father is among them. Last summer, our family was on the holiday at the beach. My father was watching my brother and I playing in the water when a woman ran him. She shouted that two children in the deeper water appeared to being in danger. Hearing this, he immediately swam to the struggling kid. After rescuing them, my father was very tiring, but when interviewed, he said what he did was real normal.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mother,
Mother’s Day is coming. I’d like to say something for you. You always work hard so that I can live the better life. Though you are busy, but you try your best to keep our house tidy and make delicious meal for me. You are strict with me in my studies, which help me make great progress. When I fail an exam, you encouraged me to keep try. When I have trouble in life, you always tell me to brave and mile. You have given me so many. Thank you for your deeply love. Happy Mother’s Day!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a 5-year-old sister． Sometimes she fights against myself for candies．When Mom makes me to give my share to her，I always feel unwillingly．Last week，I caught serious cold and had to follow the doctor’s advices to take medicine． Before I came home from school，I noticed her leaving candies beside my medicine．I go up to her and asked“Hey，what are you doing？”In a smile，she said to me，“Candies make me happy because I put them here to make you happy today．”That was the greatest thing which I’d ever experienced．
